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for Caught in the Act

by Debbie

person Kasumi(evee101)
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Way to kill the mode gohan XDDD...that was great keep up the good work =D
person Macha
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay.... to clarify.... The hijacking of this story was so lame. This story is GOOD. Poor, Poor Gohan. LOL... Goku, "Um, I'd like to home now folks!"
person taker
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much Deb. If I didn't know you they way I know you, I would say something here and now. But I won, so instead I'll just gush over you.

OMG! I LUV T3H WAY THE RIGHT!

Seriously: I Love this story, I always find myself coming to read this story because I'm sure ALL of us did this to our parents OR our child came in on us (Me exception to 2nd: no children) but yeah I always look forward to you stuff, and sometime I'll check out your Goku/Vegeta pairings. Despite not being into Yoai. Okay getting back on topic: Keep it up and wuve ya.
person ha
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahaha!!!! that was mother fukin halarious i dies trying to ceatch my breath hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Macha
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I tried emailing her at the email address she has posted in her bio. I hope she got it. This is sooooo lame.
person Camaro
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... that certainly struck me as productive. All that time spent hacking away only to make a grand ass of yourself and jack someone's story. Quite the predicament you're in.

Have you ever heard of dirty undie tea? It's when someone shits their pants, sticks it in a big pitcher of water and leaves it out in the sun. Dirty.. Undie... Tea.

That's kind of what you remind me of. A useless, appalling bottom feeder. Nothing more than a grainy skid mark in an old man's tighty whitey's.

Why don't you go either leave debsdragon's things alone...or rename yourself?

"Thedawg"?... more like "thedip".

Pfft.. what an ass.

Camaro
person Kursk
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Debsdragon! Your story has been hijacked by some jackass named "thedawg"!
person annakiyah
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor poor Gohan! Especcially at the end when the sounds start over again! This story was really great to read, and quite realistic too! Good job! Annakiyah
person Sean
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, u better continue. You made gohan seem like a brat though... but anyway it was good
person Luna
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well Done! Very well writtien and funny at the same time! Thanks for the awesome fic!

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