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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! You ever gonna update this? I really wanna know what happens next.
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta is freaking me out...what\'s his deal? What are his plans? Why are people his victoms, and in a daze? So many questions! Very good story. I like it a lot. Goku\'s home life is so. Th. That pic isn\'t going to do evil things is it? This fic is putting way to many questions in my mind...but that is very good.
anyway I <3 U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
anyway I <3 U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*kills review thing* why didn\'t it put the rest of my review!!!!!!!!!???? I said I love you!!!!!!! Oh and please update this soon, or my head may explode from all unanswered questions!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I ever felt compelled to review a story, but here goes. I read the story first because I recognized to title. Red Right Hand is one of my all time favorite songs. Then to discover the tie-in to Needfull Things...well, I liked that, too. So far this is a well written story and an interesting concept. However, and believe me this isn\'t the first time this has come up, I don\'t understand how this has anything to do with DBZ other than the characters names. Will we see anything in the future that would indicate who these characters are, or are they just the names you use in this story?
Please don\'t misunderstand, I am enjoying the story. I just wonder why you chose to list it under DBZ fanfic. You coud just as easily used any other names and the story would have been equally compelling.
Please don\'t misunderstand, I am enjoying the story. I just wonder why you chose to list it under DBZ fanfic. You coud just as easily used any other names and the story would have been equally compelling.
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! That was very awesome! That chapter makes me want more. This story reminds me of something, I just can\'t remember what, with Vegeta\'s store and all. Goku\'s homelife makes me so sad. I want to destroy his father for being such a jerk! You always write wonderfully, it\'s just beautiful, descriptive, and awesome! I want to know what is going to happen, and I really can\'t wait until you update this.
Oh, and thanks for visiting my blog all the time!!!! Also thanks for saying my daughter is cute!!! ^.*
Oh, and thanks for visiting my blog all the time!!!! Also thanks for saying my daughter is cute!!! ^.*
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If anyone wants the lyrics to the song,this fic was inspired,here they are:
written/sung by:Nick Caves And The Bad Seeds
Take a little walk to the edge of town
Go across the tracks
Where the viaduct looms,
Like a bird of doom
As it shifts and cracks
Where secrets lie in the border of fires,
in the humming of the wires
Hey man,you know
You\'re never coming back
Past the squares,past the bridge
On a gathering storm comes
a tall handsome man
In a dusty black coat with
a red right hand
He\'ll wrap you in your arms.
tell you that you\'ve been a good boy
He\'ll rekindle your dreams
it took you a lifetime to destroy
He\'ll reach deep into the hole
heal your shrinking soul
Hey buddy,you know you\'re
never coming back
He\'s a god,he\'s a man
he\'s a ghost,he\'s a guru
They\'re whispering his name
through dis disappearing land
But hidden in his coat
is a red right hand
You ain\'t got no money?
He\'ll get you some
You ain\'t got no car?He\'ll get you one
You ain\'t go no self-respect
you feel like an insect
Well don\'t you worry buddy
cause here he comes
Through the ghettos and the barrio
and the bowery and the slum
A shadow is cast wherever he stands
Stacks of green paper in his
red right hand
(organ solo)
You\'ll see him in your nightmares
you\'ll see him in your dreams
He\'ll appear out of nowhere but
he ain\'t what he seems
You\'ll see him in your head
on the TV screen
And hey buddy,I\'m warning
you to turn to it off
He\'s a ghost,he\'s a god
he\'s a man,he\'s a guru
You\'re one microscopic cog
in his catastrophic plan
Designed and directed by
his red right hand.
Hope this all helped you with the song.Agent182,I love this fic.Please update it soon.
written/sung by:Nick Caves And The Bad Seeds
Take a little walk to the edge of town
Go across the tracks
Where the viaduct looms,
Like a bird of doom
As it shifts and cracks
Where secrets lie in the border of fires,
in the humming of the wires
Hey man,you know
You\'re never coming back
Past the squares,past the bridge
On a gathering storm comes
a tall handsome man
In a dusty black coat with
a red right hand
He\'ll wrap you in your arms.
tell you that you\'ve been a good boy
He\'ll rekindle your dreams
it took you a lifetime to destroy
He\'ll reach deep into the hole
heal your shrinking soul
Hey buddy,you know you\'re
never coming back
He\'s a god,he\'s a man
he\'s a ghost,he\'s a guru
They\'re whispering his name
through dis disappearing land
But hidden in his coat
is a red right hand
You ain\'t got no money?
He\'ll get you some
You ain\'t got no car?He\'ll get you one
You ain\'t go no self-respect
you feel like an insect
Well don\'t you worry buddy
cause here he comes
Through the ghettos and the barrio
and the bowery and the slum
A shadow is cast wherever he stands
Stacks of green paper in his
red right hand
(organ solo)
You\'ll see him in your nightmares
you\'ll see him in your dreams
He\'ll appear out of nowhere but
he ain\'t what he seems
You\'ll see him in your head
on the TV screen
And hey buddy,I\'m warning
you to turn to it off
He\'s a ghost,he\'s a god
he\'s a man,he\'s a guru
You\'re one microscopic cog
in his catastrophic plan
Designed and directed by
his red right hand.
Hope this all helped you with the song.Agent182,I love this fic.Please update it soon.
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If the ubove lyrics,aren\'t the correct lyrics,I\'m sorry.Anyhoo...update this soon,pretty please
with a cherry on top.
with a cherry on top.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man! you sure do write a lot of fics! But Im not complaining Im happy! I love this one. It has a spooky guy who keeps his hand in his pocket Im not sure if I trust that dude! I LOVE DBZ HIGH SCHOOL!!!!!! ITS SO CUTE! I LLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE THHHHHHHHHHHIIIISSSSSSS SSSSSTTTTTOOOOORRRRRRRYYY!
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!! I really really like ur way of thinking, hehe wonderful start, just update soon or at least enough to keep me informed on what will happen next, and make it a good lemon too, when that time comes of course......i like the way u made Vegeta all mysterious and stuff, soo suits him, thank u......
Lov ya
Lov ya
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so drawn into this story of yours, it\'s quite original I just wished I knew the song you spoke of that inspired you to write this fan fic, but anyways I get the jest of the plot. You certainly had me guessing as to who was the main character to your story (I didn\'t know you wrote others but I\'ll try to take the time to read them too.) I love the way you worked in that mysterious stranger and once again it left me guessing who it was, I know now who it is. Please update soon after reading one chapter I\'m hooked.