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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Laughing my ass off the whole way through!! Wasn't there supposed to be a new threat coming? Or is it all comedy? Oh please keep the fun rolling!! This is soooooooo awesome!! K
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25 is a hoot! I really enjoyed myself. Vegeta passing out: CLASSIC!!!
I see Mister Trunks Briefs has some \'splainin\' to do! Goten is definitely gonna want answers.
I hope Dende can make it through the night without purple becoming his permanant color!
This is fun. Helps break the angst. It\'s nice too see them experience a few moments of joy before they have to deal with the pain/horror/misery/stunned suprise of what is to come.
Great Chapter. Wonderful dialogue.
I see Mister Trunks Briefs has some \'splainin\' to do! Goten is definitely gonna want answers.
I hope Dende can make it through the night without purple becoming his permanant color!
This is fun. Helps break the angst. It\'s nice too see them experience a few moments of joy before they have to deal with the pain/horror/misery/stunned suprise of what is to come.
Great Chapter. Wonderful dialogue.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. I laughed so hard I thought my sides were going to split open. Sadly, I kicked over my chocolate milkshake in my hysterics while reading. *mourns the milkshake* Update again soon, please!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dende.... at a .... strip club... OMG..... *ROFL*
*still Laughing*
*still Laughing*
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez...an absolutely hysterical chapter. Bra\'s last line was PRICELESS! Keep it coming and update soon.
~Yuurei
~Yuurei
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That Goten--always messing with people
“What the hell is wrong with you woman!” the prince bellowed. “Release me this instant!” --*snark*
and the last line was hilarious too. *rubs hands together evilly and glomps Jaygoose* I loved the chappie! It was funny and good and nice and it had cookies.
“What the hell is wrong with you woman!” the prince bellowed. “Release me this instant!” --*snark*
and the last line was hilarious too. *rubs hands together evilly and glomps Jaygoose* I loved the chappie! It was funny and good and nice and it had cookies.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24
Bra certainly was mature for her age! Chichi definately got Goku out of the kitchen in a hurry. And what\'s this about pregancy? Someone seems to be very fertile. LOL
I look forward to the next chapter.
~Webtester01~
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, is it just me, or is Nomi deranged? lol, I like her character though.
Awe, that was a cute conversation (and mental dialog) between Yamcha and Bra. I certainly hope she doesn\'t \'kill those bitches\' and learns to live a happy sayain life with her tail.
lol, Chichi! That\'s one heck of a way to get revenge for Goku eating all her cookies. Vegeta\'s reaction was priceless. I hope he doesn\'t pass out.
Awe, that was a cute conversation (and mental dialog) between Yamcha and Bra. I certainly hope she doesn\'t \'kill those bitches\' and learns to live a happy sayain life with her tail.
lol, Chichi! That\'s one heck of a way to get revenge for Goku eating all her cookies. Vegeta\'s reaction was priceless. I hope he doesn\'t pass out.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*ROFL* GO Denede. You tell\'em! *tears in eyes* That\'s got to be the funniest thing. I was laughing at the name calling contest, but that just took the cake. (Or in the case of \'this\' bbq, the ribs.)
Can\'t say as I blame Goten, I wouldn\'t want to be fighting with a preganant sayian either.
Glad you updated!
Can\'t say as I blame Goten, I wouldn\'t want to be fighting with a preganant sayian either.
Glad you updated!
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was excelent!
Goku gaining weight? Hmm. Looks like the Saiyan prins is going to have another kid. Perhaps.
Looking for ward to more.
Goku gaining weight? Hmm. Looks like the Saiyan prins is going to have another kid. Perhaps.
Looking for ward to more.