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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! This Nomi, seems to know alot about the Saiyans, I\'d really like to know what shes up to.
I\'m looking foward to your next update ^_^
I\'m looking foward to your next update ^_^
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^.^!!!! That was great! I can hardly wait for the fight to begin. This story leaves so many questions lingereing in my mind. Like why do these robots need samples of theYou You are good at keeping me in suspense and wonderment! You never give to much away and I really love that! It\'s just great!
Update soon!!!!! ^.*
Update soon!!!!! ^.*
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story. How old are Trunks & Goten in this one?
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noma! woah, she is intense, she really wants Kalika! Wow, a fight! I\'m scared, I hope no one gets hurt! Trunks made me laugh when he said he might as well be shopping with his mom. I love Trunks and Goten! They are just too cute, I don\'t then they are losers at all.I think they are great!
I can hardly wait until the next chappie!!!!
I can hardly wait until the next chappie!!!!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, it seems that the action has indeed started!
This chap had a fast pace to it, with a lot going on. I\'m glad you added Goten and Trunks to the mix, I sensed something was going on between the two I wonder what it could be. ^_~
I\'m really looking forward to the next chap! ^-^
This chap had a fast pace to it, with a lot going on. I\'m glad you added Goten and Trunks to the mix, I sensed something was going on between the two I wonder what it could be. ^_~
I\'m really looking forward to the next chap! ^-^
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The cell phone savvy prince proceeded to end the call with expert grace. I loved that line!
You are good, but you must know that!
When I read this, its like I am watching a movie or something...I know that\'s uaully how one\'s mind works you see everything playing out in your head, but this story flows so smoothly...it\'s radalicious! It seems as though the action has started and everyone wants a piece of the fight. And this Noma...is she an android??? This is extremely good! ^.^
You are good, but you must know that!
When I read this, its like I am watching a movie or something...I know that\'s uaully how one\'s mind works you see everything playing out in your head, but this story flows so smoothly...it\'s radalicious! It seems as though the action has started and everyone wants a piece of the fight. And this Noma...is she an android??? This is extremely good! ^.^
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I have taken so long to review, I\'ve been ill with a cold U_U
That was a great chap, allyally like your character Kalika and the way your introducing her. I\'m really looking forward to the next chap to see how she interacts with the other characters. ^_^
That was a great chap, allyally like your character Kalika and the way your introducing her. I\'m really looking forward to the next chap to see how she interacts with the other characters. ^_^
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>.< I just want to say sorry for not reviewing I have been out of town...DISNRLD!RLD!!!! but I\'m back! You know you missed me.
I loved it as always. I love when you call the fusion a union...makes me think of marriage ::stares of dreamily:: Goku and Vegeta...ah...
Kalika is sooo cool, I love that girl. Is she going to hook up with Vegeta? It sounds to me that Vegeta likes Goku but is maybe denying it, so he is maybe thinking of going with Kalika?ASE ASE NO!!!! I thought Gohan was going to hook up with her. Goku and Vegeta need to be together, Goku loves him! But, no matter what you do, the story will be great regardless.
Keep it up and update soon. ^_^
I loved it as always. I love when you call the fusion a union...makes me think of marriage ::stares of dreamily:: Goku and Vegeta...ah...
Kalika is sooo cool, I love that girl. Is she going to hook up with Vegeta? It sounds to me that Vegeta likes Goku but is maybe denying it, so he is maybe thinking of going with Kalika?ASE ASE NO!!!! I thought Gohan was going to hook up with her. Goku and Vegeta need to be together, Goku loves him! But, no matter what you do, the story will be great regardless.
Keep it up and update soon. ^_^
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-_- Sorry it took me so long to review...I have been soooooooo busy and just blah!
Anyway this chapter was so awesome! This story gets better and better! I loved it, every bit of it. I kind of feel bad for Kalika, her not knowing that she was a saiyajin and all, and then finding out there are hardly any saiyajins left. I really love this story! Seriously *hugs story* It\'s just awesome! I also loved Vegeta\'s POV, it was sooooo well written!!!
Keep it up!
Anyway this chapter was so awesome! This story gets better and better! I loved it, every bit of it. I kind of feel bad for Kalika, her not knowing that she was a saiyajin and all, and then finding out there are hardly any saiyajins left. I really love this story! Seriously *hugs story* It\'s just awesome! I also loved Vegeta\'s POV, it was sooooo well written!!!
Keep it up!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi just call me Mo.
Really like where this story is going. There\'s just one problem, you couldn\'t have stopped at a worse possible time. I\'m soght ght up into the story that I wonder and can\'t wait to see what happens to Kalika. Who she\'ll hook up with and/or if anyone else gets lucky.
Please update soon :)
Really like where this story is going. There\'s just one problem, you couldn\'t have stopped at a worse possible time. I\'m soght ght up into the story that I wonder and can\'t wait to see what happens to Kalika. Who she\'ll hook up with and/or if anyone else gets lucky.
Please update soon :)