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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far. Can\'t wait for the next update ^_^
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was really good! It was so funny! Yeah how you intorduced Gohan was cool and the scene where he shows his tail was hilarious! It seemed like he had a thing for Kalika since he was purring, but I guess thats just b/c he is saiyajin. I know he is married, but Kalika is sooooo much cooler than Videl!!!!! I love how she dresses!
Update soon!
Update soon!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!! I love the character Kalika she had me rofl when she said if he pulls out his....well you know!!!! That was great! This is really an awesome story. I can hardly wait until the next chapter....its just that good this story ROX! Oh I was also laughing when Vegeta said he could hear Goku\'s thoughts...I wonder what will become of that?????
I love it! It\'s great you are awesome!
I love it! It\'s great you are awesome!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was great (I thought i\'d review here), the way you introduced Gohan was great as you said in your A/N.
I really like the way the story is developing and you introduced Kalika (i like her character). I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
I really like the way the story is developing and you introduced Kalika (i like her character). I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I believe that I have fallen in platonic love with this story. You write very well; you\'re use of language has the perfect meter and substance to it - not too long or short, and with a good base of imagery behind it. I am extremely interested in what pairings - if any - will end up together throughout this fic loo look forward to reading your next chapter. Please update soon. -Zyshi
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Please tell me Vegeta and Goku are going to fall in love in this story, please!!!!!! I love to see Vegeta as a dad, you did a good job with that.
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you crazy!!!! Keep going! This is a very original very good story! I want to read more!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!!!!!!!!!Keep going!!!!!!!!1
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue. I really like this story. I want to know why they are sharing dreams. It is very interesting. I\'ll be waiting for an update...^_^