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Just be careful how you add Krillin, for some reason, tossing him in bed with beloved Prince-type characters makes some people queasy. *ponders this*

Anyway...I am very happy to see this chapter. Very displeased to hear school is being a bitch. *glare at school not at Jaygoose*

*goes off to reread chapter and giggle about many things.*

hehe, with the first three sections of this chapter I thought it was all going to be a food theme. As it turned out, of course you know, it wasn't. I loved this chapter. Everything was so kawaii. Peanut butter and cheese puffs. Ah, Gohan is leading Kalika down such and evil road. I am glad they got all they needed to say done in the pantry. I just hope no one walks in on them. *wink*

So, interesting, Piccolo having a thing for seventeen. Eighteen played everything real cool. Nice.

I loved the game playing between Goku and Vegeta. hehe, Yeah, that would certainly be intereg tog to see, Vegeta playing a friendly game of hide and go seek. I had a sense that he wasn't going to be too upset if he ended up having a 'goofing' off side.

As for your 2nd A/N, wow, you have a lot of plans for this fic. Yay!

*dies* I loved that warning! that was the bestest warning ever. *sigh * Alright, so I read this back when you only had 99 reviews, but the darn AFF.net wn\'tn\'t let me review so I was like *sigh* I\'ll wait. (I don\'t know why I\'m sighing a lot, feel free to ignore it.)

Poor Cell. *pats the dear * *shakes fists at Radditz the bastard*

Siiiigh. All very well written. *goes away because there is html-ing to do. *

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I feel like I was ambushed. What the..... Okay, it was a well written chapter. I don\'t think I was prepaired for it to be a rape chapter though. (Eeeek) That funny look behind Raditz\'s eyes gave me a moment of pause though. Was that leading somewhere perhaps?

Stupid voice, can\'t it be a little more helpful? (Well, probably not, but I had to ask.)

Your description of Cell\'s coloring was... well.... discriptive. I knew he had green features overall, but this chapter went into much better details.

I am rather disturbed that Nomi didn\'t do anything that hollar about the racket. Of course, it IS a group of \'bad\' people. I guess they don\'t stop eachother from hurting one another(come on people where\'s the sense of team?)

Do I get to pick what side of the coin I want to see more of? I think I liked the first one, but then, a coin ALWAYS has two sides.

WOOO HOOO YEAH!
I loved it...sorry I have been m.i.a. for awhile but blame my computer...
Anyway great, great chappie.
And I loved the part with Vegeta and the bloody grin.
I also loved the whole Goku/Kakarott thing.
Now very curious about Trunks and the interaction with Seventeen and Eighteen was great. Excellently written...I am still drooling over the whole Goku/Vegeta scene. ^_~
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-MB-

Fianally! Yay! VxG lemon. Woot!

So, Kalika is still having issues with her pregancey. I am not surprised. LOL about her thoughts on Goku and babies. Of course, I wonder if she has thought the implication through that Vegeta seems to want Goku/Kakarott very much. Hmmmm.

So, back to the journal and learning about her parents. Yeah, I guess having a raging Ice-jin going through the universe is a good reason to boot sayians off of your planet. I am very glad the one little alien decided to go with them. I think the guys are going to need the help.

So, Seventeen and Piccolo still aren\'t revealing much in the way of information about their future vistor. I guess I will just have to wait... impatiently. :)

Looking forward to more.

Would write more but I\'m strapped tor time.

Keep up the good work.

GASP! I was reading non-nc-17 rated material?! *runs around like chicken with head cut off *

Now. What\'s happenin\' with Cell? I wanna know! *waaaah* And who\'s the company? Who? *pokes Jaygoose * Come on, you can tell meeeeeeeeee, I won\'t tell anyone. *pokes more *

And yay! Yay! Vegeta/Goku! yay! Loved the line \"Did he just fucking bite me?\" That\'s what I would think. ;)

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I loved the scene between Radditz and Cell.

Another geat chapter.

I enjoy reading your stories.

Keep up the good work.