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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Having one of your past lifes talking to you in your head has to be a bit unnerving, and then, to top it all off, Mireemseems to be in heat, and doesn\'t even realize it.
Poor Kalika; it kind of sucks having to figure life out on your own. I meaure,ure, people have been telling her she\'s preganant, but then to have the knowledge hit you like a ton of bricks. I think that it registers in the b for for a time before it becomes a reality in the heart.
I was almost afraid during the Goku and Vegeta portion of the chapter that you were going to have Goku tell Vegeta that what ever the Prince was eating wasn\'t food. That would have been, um, awkward (shees, my spelling) Still, Goku just wanting another kiss is kind of sweet. I hope Vegeta has enough patience for the baka.
Hmmm, 17 is still expecting the company, I hope the next chapter we get to find out why company is coming.
Poor Kalika; it kind of sucks having to figure life out on your own. I meaure,ure, people have been telling her she\'s preganant, but then to have the knowledge hit you like a ton of bricks. I think that it registers in the b for for a time before it becomes a reality in the heart.
I was almost afraid during the Goku and Vegeta portion of the chapter that you were going to have Goku tell Vegeta that what ever the Prince was eating wasn\'t food. That would have been, um, awkward (shees, my spelling) Still, Goku just wanting another kiss is kind of sweet. I hope Vegeta has enough patience for the baka.
Hmmm, 17 is still expecting the company, I hope the next chapter we get to find out why company is coming.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*explodes *
You know *is red in face and stuttering a lot * I can do cliffhangers with my stories because i UPDATE EVERY FRICKING DAY but it\'s juseeeaeeean when you do it. *glare *
Anyway, it was so good I don\'t know what I want to know more about. *bites fingernails * Are those visitors from the future like Kabu and Kilik (is that her name? Am I wrong...I could be wrong.) Or is it some other future people. Because if you\'re going with that whole \'History of Trunks\' thing than it makes sense that the parentless kids come back.
Then of course I want Cell to kick Radditz\'s ass, but I also want to know about the smell.
AND I AM DYING to see what happens with Goku and Vegeta. Look *points at dead self * LOOK! DEAD! *sighs *
I do love this story. Right. So, gotta go and celebrate the birthday of the nation and all that.
Tootlies,
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You know *is red in face and stuttering a lot * I can do cliffhangers with my stories because i UPDATE EVERY FRICKING DAY but it\'s juseeeaeeean when you do it. *glare *
Anyway, it was so good I don\'t know what I want to know more about. *bites fingernails * Are those visitors from the future like Kabu and Kilik (is that her name? Am I wrong...I could be wrong.) Or is it some other future people. Because if you\'re going with that whole \'History of Trunks\' thing than it makes sense that the parentless kids come back.
Then of course I want Cell to kick Radditz\'s ass, but I also want to know about the smell.
AND I AM DYING to see what happens with Goku and Vegeta. Look *points at dead self * LOOK! DEAD! *sighs *
I do love this story. Right. So, gotta go and celebrate the birthday of the nation and all that.
Tootlies,
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
You are the Queen of Evil!!!!!
*sobs* so many cliffies all in one chapter! how is that even possible...you know that is just plain cruel.
And Radditz calling Cell precious is just scary...are you sure he isn\'t Gollum?
And what does he know that Cell doesn\'t know?
And Vegeta and Goku!!!! *bangs head on table* They must kiss they must sex it up hehe...
Gosh I am just boggled...I really am there was like at least 3 cliffies in that one chapter!!!!! I just love Cell\'s chter.ter...and I can\'t help but to feel sorry for the hybrid. He seems so innocent but he has the other Cell within him which cant be fun.
AH! I just thought about the last 2 lines again!!! Goku must kiss Vegeta and after they kiss they must have hot monkey lovin! You must update this very soon.
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You are the Queen of Evil!!!!!
*sobs* so many cliffies all in one chapter! how is that even possible...you know that is just plain cruel.
And Radditz calling Cell precious is just scary...are you sure he isn\'t Gollum?
And what does he know that Cell doesn\'t know?
And Vegeta and Goku!!!! *bangs head on table* They must kiss they must sex it up hehe...
Gosh I am just boggled...I really am there was like at least 3 cliffies in that one chapter!!!!! I just love Cell\'s chter.ter...and I can\'t help but to feel sorry for the hybrid. He seems so innocent but he has the other Cell within him which cant be fun.
AH! I just thought about the last 2 lines again!!! Goku must kiss Vegeta and after they kiss they must have hot monkey lovin! You must update this very soon.
^.*
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never ever take that long again missy! Too much time has passed and I suffered withdrawal. Look! *points at self shaking and babbling in corner* Withdrawal!
Now this is one of the funniest things I have ever heard/read:
Hmm…” He pondered. “Maybe he should be the one doing the fucking.”
“As much as I’d love to at this exact moment.” A voice interrupted. “I am entirely too weak with hunger to be any good at it.”
My dogs are still wondering what\'s wrong with my brain. Ah... that was good. That was almost worth the wait. *sigh * And (don\'t tell anyone) but I sort of a little bit kinda like your Gohan. He\'s not an ass or anything. *pats him * Now, not to discourage any sort of Vgeta/Goku action, but what is 17 up to and where is Kalika?
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Now this is one of the funniest things I have ever heard/read:
Hmm…” He pondered. “Maybe he should be the one doing the fucking.”
“As much as I’d love to at this exact moment.” A voice interrupted. “I am entirely too weak with hunger to be any good at it.”
My dogs are still wondering what\'s wrong with my brain. Ah... that was good. That was almost worth the wait. *sigh * And (don\'t tell anyone) but I sort of a little bit kinda like your Gohan. He\'s not an ass or anything. *pats him * Now, not to discourage any sort of Vgeta/Goku action, but what is 17 up to and where is Kalika?
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-_- you are evil....you know that!?
E-V-I-L!
All this time you talking that you were evil...I didn\'t believe you until now!!!!!
*sobs* Goku and Vegeta are so close...so close.
I absoluely loved this chap a little bit of demi love happening which was so cute when Gohan walked in and the conversation that too place...loved it.
And Vegeta is sooo not fooling me. Goku\'s all hey Geta you\'ll take care of the food right? Vegeta *grins* yow gow go get cleaned up...
that made me suspicious...I think he was spying on the younger one...hehe
And the whole ending of that scene was sooooo good, I didn\'t want it to end...
“As much as I’d love to at this exact moment.” A voice interrupted. “I am entirely too weak with hunger to be any good at it.” ---*dies* Feed that man damn it!
and what are those androids up to I wonder?
You are excellent at keeping everyone in character.
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E-V-I-L!
All this time you talking that you were evil...I didn\'t believe you until now!!!!!
*sobs* Goku and Vegeta are so close...so close.
I absoluely loved this chap a little bit of demi love happening which was so cute when Gohan walked in and the conversation that too place...loved it.
And Vegeta is sooo not fooling me. Goku\'s all hey Geta you\'ll take care of the food right? Vegeta *grins* yow gow go get cleaned up...
that made me suspicious...I think he was spying on the younger one...hehe
And the whole ending of that scene was sooooo good, I didn\'t want it to end...
“As much as I’d love to at this exact moment.” A voice interrupted. “I am entirely too weak with hunger to be any good at it.” ---*dies* Feed that man damn it!
and what are those androids up to I wonder?
You are excellent at keeping everyone in character.
^.*
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter.
When Gohan walk in on the two demis, that was funny. LOL
I really liked the part where Goku had just finished washing and started
cheering himself on about doing the deed with Vegeta! -LMAO
Regarding the cliffie, the was very evil of you! *EVIL* I say. *chuckles*
Keep up the good work.
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again I am reminded how much I LOVE THIS FIC. ! You used some discriptive words that I hadn\'t read/heard in a while. Treases (did I spell that correctly?) and whippersnapper. Hehe, I love that word.
I found it very interesting that Trunks smells like things that are lavander. It was cute.
Silly Goku. I like watching clouds and swimming in creeks, but I usually don\'t go around vocalizing my fantasies for the world to hear. Well, at least Vegeta knows where he stands with Goku at the moment. I certain hope they find the time to make lemonade after they eat.
Yes, you are evil with the cliff hanger, but take it as the compliment it is meant to be. Of course, with cliff hangers come questions. What is Seventeen up to anyway? And which Namekian were you writing about? hehe, you know I had to ask. It\'s like not finishing the tune \"Shave and a hair cut, _____ _____\" Of course, the tune doesn\'t have the same affect on paper. Needs audio.
I am waiting for more.
I found it very interesting that Trunks smells like things that are lavander. It was cute.
Silly Goku. I like watching clouds and swimming in creeks, but I usually don\'t go around vocalizing my fantasies for the world to hear. Well, at least Vegeta knows where he stands with Goku at the moment. I certain hope they find the time to make lemonade after they eat.
Yes, you are evil with the cliff hanger, but take it as the compliment it is meant to be. Of course, with cliff hangers come questions. What is Seventeen up to anyway? And which Namekian were you writing about? hehe, you know I had to ask. It\'s like not finishing the tune \"Shave and a hair cut, _____ _____\" Of course, the tune doesn\'t have the same affect on paper. Needs audio.
I am waiting for more.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the tiltle and loved when Vegeta used the title in a sentence. But what I loved most was Cell I thought he was just plain adorable. This fic gets better and better each time I read it. I can\'t wait to read more about G/V!
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell no! She didn’t like the way he dragged out her name like that. And was he pouting?--ROFL!!!! aww he is pouting.
Oh this boy asked entirely too many questions. --LoL
Because he of course contained cells of the Namek Piccolo (Nameks being capable of the nifty trick of regeneration and all) and Cell would have been able to rebuild his body completely with the help of the Namek’s cells. --how very very clever....^_^
Now, go on.” She motioned toward the lab door. “And don’t blow up anymore of my things.” --hehe...that is so cute.
You’re talking about this kid like you planned it or something!” She said.
“I did.” --Lmao! I knew h eplanned it!
What the hell do you take me for?!” Kalika shrieked. “This isn’t wild kingdom. You actually believe that I would have just let them take me?!--@_@~!!!!! *dies laughing* Oh gosh I can\'t breathe. I am loving this conversation!
Well, that’s a loud ass calm!” Vegeta bellowed. --rofl!!! they are crazy!
Is it a good idea for her to fly angry, Geta?” Goku asked looking off it the distance. --ROFL!!!!!
The Prince was not pleased. Not in the least--me either..I want lemons!!!! *hands you a lemon pie, lemon candy, lemon soda, lemon lemon\'s, lemon computer* Now get to it!!!! :)
Yamcha paled in response. “Well…when a guy and a girl really like each other…”--LoL, he can be so lame..but I still like the guy.
The whole conversation w/ Chi and Bulma was hilarious and very well written!
I can\'t wait until next chappie!!!!!
Oh this boy asked entirely too many questions. --LoL
Because he of course contained cells of the Namek Piccolo (Nameks being capable of the nifty trick of regeneration and all) and Cell would have been able to rebuild his body completely with the help of the Namek’s cells. --how very very clever....^_^
Now, go on.” She motioned toward the lab door. “And don’t blow up anymore of my things.” --hehe...that is so cute.
You’re talking about this kid like you planned it or something!” She said.
“I did.” --Lmao! I knew h eplanned it!
What the hell do you take me for?!” Kalika shrieked. “This isn’t wild kingdom. You actually believe that I would have just let them take me?!--@_@~!!!!! *dies laughing* Oh gosh I can\'t breathe. I am loving this conversation!
Well, that’s a loud ass calm!” Vegeta bellowed. --rofl!!! they are crazy!
Is it a good idea for her to fly angry, Geta?” Goku asked looking off it the distance. --ROFL!!!!!
The Prince was not pleased. Not in the least--me either..I want lemons!!!! *hands you a lemon pie, lemon candy, lemon soda, lemon lemon\'s, lemon computer* Now get to it!!!! :)
Yamcha paled in response. “Well…when a guy and a girl really like each other…”--LoL, he can be so lame..but I still like the guy.
The whole conversation w/ Chi and Bulma was hilarious and very well written!
I can\'t wait until next chappie!!!!!
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay more Goku/Veggie. I\'m so desperate for them to just say were a couple,lol. ^_^ Poor Bura she is so funny, heh. Can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!