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This is a very creative and exciting A/U. I am happy you updated, and I can\'t wait until you update again.

So....no VxG huh? (growl) Ah well, it\'s a GREAT story any way. Maybe you\'ll surprise us all later? (wishful thinking..........)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! All that is good and right in my perfect world of yaoi has been destroyed! ::cries:: I saw this coming did did! Gohan is staying w/ Videl...and Vegeta is going to mate with Kalika? But what about Goku? Won\'t he be upset if they mate! I am so distressed. But this story is still very good! jus just very surprised, shocked and traumatized...ok not that serious but you get the general idea. And I think Dr. Tyler is making Cell. Please update soon! PLEASE!!!

ok you beat me at updating...but your at an advantage I am sick w/ the flu...and I have been slacking too! *shakes fist at self* I am working on my next chapter for The way it wasnt written...
but anyway...enough about me and now about you and your ficcie!
Great chapter!

He had pushed down his Ki level to barely anything in hopes of it staying his new private meditating spot.-- looks like it wont be his new spot since Kalika found him thanks to Goku ^.^ What a guy!

What did he have to do to get away from the jackass anyway?--rofl that was great!!!

Besides, before he would even consider taking her for his next mate ---*sobs* So Goku and Veggie aren\'t going to get together? WHY??? NO!!!! Well actually I am not that distrt b/t b/cI really like Kalika and the building relationship she has w/ her Prince. I just thought with the whole bond mind thing and since Goku has a crush on him and...etc, that they would get together...but I guess I just have to have patience and see what you\'re gonna do.

The poor girl had never been with another of her kind much less a male; definitely not one as worthy as him.---As self absorbed as Vegeta is...he is soooooo right! He is so worthy, worthy of *coughs* me...

“So,” The cunning Prince began, his voice low and husky. “If I were to translate this journal for you…what would I get in return?” --Just like our Prince...never something for nothing!

And now the Prince was near again, breathing his warm breath on to her, emanating the loveliest smell that she had ever experienced.--why can\'t that be me?

The blunette scientist --I have never heard that before, that was lovely!

The lavender haired Demi just stared at his mother in reply. Hell, if he knew. --rofl I love Trunks!

This was amazing and I love everyone\'s personalities...so defined and well written. As for guessing what The Dr. is going to do no way...I hate guessing I am always wrong...*shakes head* sheesh it\'s embarressing you should have seen me trying to guess at the killer in Get Psycho and I still don\'t know who it is!
But I want to guess, I want to guess so badly, I just HATE being wrong! I feel like you gave lots of clues in that openeing paragraph to the chapter before this one...but I will keep my guess to myself and see if I get it right or not...I know I am no fun. I will be so mad at myself if I had it right this whole time, but didn\'t want to guess for fear of being wrong.
Oh well I suppose I have rambled on long enough...
Keep up the excellence.
^.*
-MB-

Hi...::looks down ashamed:: I know I was suppost to have written MPS by now (I\'ve only got about half a page left to do.) But I\'m sooo busy, trying to make some sort of schedule with my life ::sigh:: Hopefully I can email it to you by Fri. ^-^

On to the fic...
Some comments in this chap were hilarious, \'Definitely not one as worthy as him.\' - Vegeta, so full of himself! (Can\'t say I blame him ^_~)
And I\'d be pretty disappointed if all Vegeta wanted to do was \'train\' me. U_U
(But then again it might turn around for her ^_~)

And the Dragonballs, what happened to the dragonball? Who used them? Who found them in less then a month>
Your laeving me in suspense here!!!

Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^

How humble you are! I can\'t see how you could ever say this sucks, honestly! I REALLY REALLY like it. And do you know how rare that is for me? Its a miracle in itself that I\'ve even got the time to go an explore the world of fanfiction as it is these days. I\'ve begun writing my own and believe me, its a cold day in hell every time I actually find the time to read anyone else\'s. Do you know how GLAD I am that I have? This is like a diamond in the rough! An actual story line framed with amazing writing skills, beautifully added descriptions and believable, likeable, loveable characters! Do you know how AMAZING it is that I\'ve gotten past the first chapter?! It hasn\'t happened in weeks! This is truly an incredible story and I caneveneven begin to express how proud you ought to be with yourself. You really are talented and sometimes, I forget just how much I love fanfiction.


Thanks for reminding me.

Love
Camaro

I thought this chapter was great! We got to find out a little more about the androids, but there are still many hidden parts. (But that\'s good cause it leaves me wanting to read more to find out! ^-^)

The part when Goku was imitating Vegeta was hilarious! ^_^
And now Goku can read \'Geta\'s thought\'s... ::giggles:: Poor Vegeta.

Looking foward to the next chap! ^_^

Awwww now Goku knows he can hear our precious Vegeta\'s thoughts. thats so cute. and what about Kalika is she gonna hook up with Gohan or what? You know you want her to. and Vegeta knows he wants Goku, so he need to stop fooling around and get with him! This was a very funny chap also, Goku was really making me laugh he is crazy imitating Vegeta!!!!! that was so kawaii!

Hmm. Never seen a girl Saiyan fight. Wonder what she can do?

Oh, I love that Goku ripped his gi. He always seems to end up with only enough clothes on to be decent, doesn\'t he? Poor boy getting crushed under all that rubble.

Loved Vegeta. He was so...Vegeta. You wrote him really well. And Goku too. And I like Kalika.

Hey alright you posted!!!!! That just makes my day!!!
WHATS IN THE BOX!!?!?!?!??!?!?!? *runs in a circle pulling hair* Oh an I agree with your disclaimer...*smiles*
Goku is just TOO CUTE when he is looking in the GC, gosh I love him (but I love Vegeta more) anyway he made me laugh when he did that impression of Vegeta. That was freaking hilarious, I could just picture that. I am still laughing about it.

And Goku concentrating with his tongue hanging out the side of his mouth, very cute.
“I was just kidding!” Goku said rather quickly. “I know…Don’t mock the Great Vegeta! rofl...
This was a awesome chapter..that I wish would never end.

You are excellent at writing a story that makes me bang my head on my keyboard wondering what is going to happen next!!!! I mean really, what\'s in the box, and are Vegeta and Goku going to hook up, o Veg Vegeta waiting for Goku to make the 1st move...GAH!!!!!!! I need to know.

I guess I will have to wait for these and other questions to be answered in later chapters... Thanks for updating, this was and superb chap worthy of the wait....
Keep up the excellence....
^.*
-MB-

“Alright, this guy is definitely acting weird.” Kalika thought. “I swear to Kami that if he pulls out his wang, I am so going to kick is ass from here back to Japan.” I fell off my chair laughing about that. I tried to imagine it, and I failed, but the attempts were pretty funny.

Poor Goku; Vegeta probably should have told him that he could hear his thoughts.

Where did she come from?!

*oh, and the part with Bulma giving him the evil grin, that was good. I like Bulma here.*