rate_review Reviews

Poor Gohan. He went through all that work to save the planet from Cell and Hercule took all the credit. What a blow to his ego with his new lady friend. *sigh*

And Vegeta needs to stop thinking about females and start thinking about Goku!

\"Freak\" I don\'t think is an adequate enough word to describe what Goku will do when Gohan tells him that he\'s found the girl that Goku is looking for. But I shalt have to continue to read to find out, won\'t I?

Story is good. Funny. I like it very much.

Chapter da *not sure actually*
Intri.
A.
Ahhh. I love Trunks.

Must go read next chapter!

*gasp* I just read your review for the story More of Us....and I do read the reviews...Im so nosy...but back to the subject at hand *gasps again* Someone is going to become you know...who?????? oh gosh!!!! Why did you to this to me!!!! I have been thinking about it all day now!!!! You better hurry up and update!!!!!!! *shakes fist at you* I need to know who the parents are!!!!!!!!! *dies, but is alive enough to whisper* WHO????? *err...did I say whisper I meant yell* WHO????? DARN YOU!!!!!! I mean it you better update in one hour, or else!!!! *laughs* just kidding! but please update soon!
^.*
-MB-

Hi! CardDragonBall here. I loved this line: It was their thing. He was Kakarot and the angry prince was Geta. It was part of their strange bond; the sparing, the insults, the Getas and the Kakarots.

Yes! I want to know what\'s happening, and thankfully, there are already chapters ahead of me to read. Yeah!

I like the way you\'ve written them; and made an exposition that is very interesting, and mysterious but not confusing.

Chapter one:
It didn\'t suck. I think you write them very well. Your Goku is probably much smarter than mine. Hn, and I loved his reaction to Bulma asking if he was sleeping with Vegeta. That\'s our Goku. And our Vegeta who won\'t say anything about his nightmare. I\'ll come back annishnish reading, promise; I like it!

Fighting scenes aren\'t your forte, you say, well you did a good job to me. It was a very cool fight scene which had me worried about Trunks.
So you were going to end the chap at the Big Bang Attack? I am glad you didn\'t or else I would hae to strangle you! ::strangles you anyway:: AH! How dare you end it right there!!! Is she going to blast Vegeta? Whats going to happen!!! How could you do this to me! I need to know! HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was a great chap, it was really \'actionpacked\'??? o_0.
It was really exciting reading all of the fighting scenes!
I can\'t wait until the next chap, so I can find out more about Kalika! ^_^

Thanks for answering my question. Well in FF X/X-2 there is an Island called Kalika, but now that I think about it it might be spelled Kilika. *shrugs* I can\'t remember.
I can\'t believe my eyes either! *rubs eyes* Why is Vegeta hugging her? Not that I mind...but Goku wanted me to ask. Oh yeah *kills Nomi* thats for blasting Vegeta in the back, nobody and I mean nobody hurts my OUJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok now that I got that out of my system. That was a great chapter, with great fight scenes, and a most lovely Big Bang Attack, which I cherish! Oh and the chapter ended so cool w/ the dream sequence. I was so proud of Goku when he remebered what Kalika does to Vegeta in the dream, and tries to stop it from happening. Well I loved it, as I always do! I can hardly wait for the next update. ^.*
Keep up the excellence!

Does Noma work for Dr. Gero? She is very interesting to me. Why do these robots need samples? All I know is they better not hurt Vegeta!!! Or else!!!! Anyway I really like Noma, I often find myself loving the \'evil character\' in fics. I cant wait until you update!!!!!!

Hi! I just re-read this whole story. I love it so much. Anyway I have a question did you get the name Kalika from Final Fantast X???????