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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story!! kinda gross how people die but i liked it!!
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh that was good, that was really good!!!
I liked the VERY graphic dicriptions ^-^
I liked the VERY graphic dicriptions ^-^
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!!!! Kakarott don\'t you dare hurt my ouji!!!! *cries and hugs Vegeta* GOSH!!! That was soooooo great!!!!!! I am loving every bit of it. Goku is just so darn evil and spooky, he is scaring me. I WANT MORE!!!! I can\'t wait until you continue! But unfortunately me being the idiot I am if I saw evil Kakarott in a dark alleyway I would probably drool and hand him a knife to kill me with...he is just to sexy! *coughc* but Vegeta is sexier! *smiles*
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies* BUHAHAHAHA!! that was sooo funny! i love it! too bad it was a dream... *frowns* i loved it! it was wonderful AND! YEAH! less spelling errors! WOOT! hey i did say, if you want me to beta your stuff i will! remember that! but only if you want me to. ^ ^ i can do spell check and such! Very good chapter and hey! you think i should put GP up here? *nods* maybe. if you think it\'s alriught- i will! Talk to you soon and i hope you\'re doing well!
your bestest buddy Agent 182
your bestest buddy Agent 182
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really hate Bulma in this story she is such a bitch to Vegeta! I hope she does die again! This is really great. Update soon please! Oh and the second chapter you said was boring, no it wasn\'t it was great! and zombie Goku is kinda funny...
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeesh! so was it a dream, or not? Becuase he got his arm cut off, but it was there when he woke up, was it not? accept for the holes in his mouth *shiver* that\'s it, right? So... reality or fantasy?