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I'd have been pissing my pants if Vegeta had been pointing a gun at me. I don't know who I would have thought was the lesser of two evils at that point. Finch or Vegeta. Thank goodness it wasn't me!

The tension in this chapter is amazing.

YAY!!! An update! WHOOT!

Finally, another chapter! I really hope this story ends. It's creepy beyond belief. However, its also very good. I poor Goku is okay.

Gah!!! How can you stop there?! Please update soon!

p.s. - Excellent chapter :P

i've read your story twice before and i've been waiting for almost a year now for chapter 21 to come out. where are you guys?! i miss reading new chapters! i've been going insane waiting for you to update this! sigh... please update before i get sent to a nuthouse.

oh..my..god...!!!! This... this is... the GREATEST STORY EVER!! OMG!! you HAVE to continue! the suspense is KILLING me! i really love how the story\'s set up... how you keep on guessing and trying to figure out the hidden meanings..! this prolly sounds corny, no wait it DOES sound corny but... it gives me goosebumps! lol! ^-^ i LOVE suspense! keep goin\'! you\'re great!

Rekilleht... Clever, very clever. *laughs* My friend complimented me on figuring that out before finishing the story. Very good, keep up the good work ^^ It\'s so hard to find really good twisted stories like this one

Goku sure is popular. I wonder how many chapters are left. But, yeah, okay...I\'m confused and I hate feeling confused *cries*. I thought that I understood but after rereading it, I still don\'t. Who the hell is the Other? I can\'t seem to believe that it\'s Vegeta (\"Briefs\". hi hi), not only would it make me cry but it would be very freaky. So is he being posessed? Is there two Vegetas? Does Vegeta has 2 personalities? Maybe it\'s the denial in me that\'s talkin: it can\'t be the real Vegeta. Fuck, I\'ll have to read this another time. *sigh* so confused...

This story rocks!! I can see a \"Saw\" vibe in it sometimes and I freaking loved that movie. I\'m still waiting for a new chapters ladies, don\'t leave us hanging. -NNFN-

Who is Finch? everyong want to know that now. But the story is really dark and tiwsted like the reality of this curl word

Well worth the wait. Finch is evil personified. The question is: Will \'The Other\' get there in time?
And what of Goku? What shape will his mind be in after this? Just how fractured will he be?

Update Soon, Please? And by all means, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!

O.O AAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Finch is back, and he\'s really out doing himself... .AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh


I have to agree with Goku on this one, Videl dug her own grave for nothing, because I think Finch is going to kill Pan any way.... Although I thought Pan was already dead. It has been a while since I read this story. YAY for the update. :)

O.o Who\'s at the station detaining Detective Alex? NOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooo.