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I hated this story. But for some sick, sick reason, I couldn\'t stop reading. It was like an inevitable black void sucking you in. You cant get around it. Anyway, if Goku/Vegeta dont kill this guy, Finch, That would just plain suck. I mean, finch cant live. Nope. Just let vegeta rip his head off and burn him or something. He\'s not immortal (is he?)

you write very good horror fics >.< scared the hell outta me hahaha

Amazing, really it is. I was very intrigued by the story and I urge you to continue...

Damn, I just read all 19 chapters without stopping! This is kick ass! I love it, and yeah, its long, but it was great, creative, very-detailed, and different. I really liked it and I\'m glad you didn\'t give up on it. I actually did suspect Vegeta and Anton...but I wasn\'t really sure. Oh well, I just hope you continue it. Your story almost sounds done. Of course, I like your story, since I am a fan of the Hannibal Lecter Triology, not that this story and the movies are the same, they just have the same theme: Psychos. But anywhos, I\'d have to say, this is my favorite DBZ fanfic so far. You did some good work, and don\'t worry about short chapters because most of the chapters you did were long, so you are entitled for some short chapters, too. Until next time...

You know what I was thinking today? You ought to enter this story into my Contest of the Grotesque on the Kiss of Hell website. It\'s really along the lines of what I\'m looking for.. something violent, horrofic, gorey and not centered around love. It\'s perfect really so if you\'d like to enter, go to my website that can be found on my bio and you\'ll be directed to the fanfic contest page.

Good luck and I hope to be hearing from you soon..

Love
Camaro

Oh, this was a very good chapter. I am surprised that Anton let Alex live. Why should he? Well, who knows the mind of Finch? *shudders* I\'ll probably never \'understand\' his reasons. Even if he told me point blank I still wouldn\'t understand. :)

Have a good holiday. I am going to miss you.

Sooo gooooood. Another beautiful and confusing chapter. I can\'t wait for the chapter that will bring everything to light. Update soon, please.

ch. 15
I loved it...especially the ending.

“I’ve never heard of a psycho trying to tell us something by writing the word Cage in blood.” His arms crossed over his chest.

I was laughing so hard when I read that. Although I still feel sad for Goku, width everything he has to go through and all. It\'s sad. How I missed reading this...well I am off to read the other chapters.

-MB-

ch 16
Another great chapter. The lemon was good and it creeped me out a little bit. But then again this whole ficcy creeps me out that is why I love it so.
When he bit into that apple...so gross!!!!! Poor, poor Goku.
And another nice cliffhanger. ^_^

He stumbled back into welcoming arms that he didn’t want.
Mwahahahahahahahahaha! That was GREAT! How could you end it there! *shakes fist at you* I was laughing when Goku said once he gets to the front door he would fly away from that psycho. Sure, he knows he likes all that attention. j/k The sad part is he could fly all he wants it seems no one can ever escape Finch. :(
And poor Vegeta he is confused as hell, he doesn\'t know what he did or didn\'t do. I always laugh when I read Vegeta Briefs...hehe I don\'t know why...
and Poor Goku he just can\'t seem to escape can he. *smiles* that\'s sexay, now if only Goku was bleeding...
I want to know what is going to happen!

-MB-