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OMFG! I so fucking confused!! *cries*
But I\'m so gunna keep reading this!
It\'s too good to NOT read! :gonk:
i_i

Haha.. how retarded am I? I TOTALLY didn\'t get that was a flashback and I\'m like \"dude, has it been that long since I\'ve read this? Cripes!? What the hell is going on!?\" So yeah, now I totally get it! And what an awesome chapter. I think that flashback was totally necessary and gives us alot more history on the entire story as a whole. Its almost.. dare I say it, emotional to look back in time and see how this all came to be you know? And I\'m beginning to love the titles of your chapters.

This was a great one, I\'ll be continuing now.

Camaro

WHAT\"S GOING ON~!!!!? I\'m so confused!!!! It\'s 6:50 in the morning and I\'v been reading this story since about 1 in the morning!! I couldn\'t stop reading it was so deliciously addictive I wanted to cry and scream at the same time! Who is Finch? Is he Human? Is Vegeta Crazy IS GOKU crazy? WHAT YOU HAVE TO FINISH IT IM GONNA GO INSANE!!!

I <3 Geta&Goku...poor geta...no wonder he\'s losing his mind...

AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh. I don\'t know where to start. hehe, seems like IT\'ing would be a good plan right now. *bumps into a wall in attempt* Damn, still haven\'t learned how to do that.

No, this chapter was very very good. Vegeta wakes up with no memory of the last day (couple of \'em?) WTF.

Can\'t wait for the next one.

I LOVE THIS STORY!

OH PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE WE'RE DYING OUT HERE!!!!!!!! TELL SATANSPINNER TO UPDATE TOO!!!!!!1 WE LOVE THIS FIC AND ARE ACHING FOR MORE. DONT YOU LOVE US??????? PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! pwease?

Chapt6
6

This was an ... interesting lemon. I did like the first part of it very much. The second part, I was a bit ... shocked? hehe. Interesting how Vegeta WOULDN'T stop. Hmmm, wonder what that has to do with. And, I may be a bit slow, or I just can't remember, but when did Vegeta start calling Goku 'Goku' instead of Kakarott. I do have to say, I think it makes for an interesting perspective on Vegeta's psyche if this was done intetionally.

The biting into the apple and finding something that wasn't suppose to be there. EEEEEEEEewwwwwwwwwwww. It reminds me of a couple of times I have done that before checking an apple for worm holes and gotten an unwanted surpirse.

Now what's going to happen? *sighs* well, I s I s I will have to wait for the next update to find out.

Um, how come I am getting this funny, creepy feeling that that isn't Vegeta? I guess I will have to wait to find out. About many things.

It... it was Vegeta? All along... *whimper* Don\'t like it... don\'t like it. Hurts. Hurts my head...
God, you\'re good.

It... it was Vegeta? All along... *whimper* Don\'t like it... don\'t like it. Hurts. Hurts my head...
God, you\'re good.