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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was so fucking hot Jen-chan. I adored that. Dies and goes to tyka heaven
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Bravisimo! A well writen piece full of seduction and lust. Two thumbs up.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blinking*
w-wow... explosive man... how did you get to be such a good writer? that was fucking awesome!!!! write another PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
w-wow... explosive man... how did you get to be such a good writer? that was fucking awesome!!!! write another PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for the second chapter ^_^
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
Yeah I do think they make and cute couple so I\'ll Review this one. some odd reason I can\'t get to review part two sorry!. but after the Shower...
What next? I mean what are they going to do get locked in and room? clost? frazer? alone togher? cute!. and they are and couple right?
What about Rei and Max? are they and couple also? and what dose Kenny and Hillary (If she in this story) what do they think about this?
lot of good come win you are alone with and love one. but it would be kind of funny if someone walk in on them lol.
Is this the end? or is there going to be part 3?.
tbc...na? to see what aou gou going to do I hope you have evething planed out.
Yeah I do think they make and cute couple so I\'ll Review this one. some odd reason I can\'t get to review part two sorry!. but after the Shower...
What next? I mean what are they going to do get locked in and room? clost? frazer? alone togher? cute!. and they are and couple right?
What about Rei and Max? are they and couple also? and what dose Kenny and Hillary (If she in this story) what do they think about this?
lot of good come win you are alone with and love one. but it would be kind of funny if someone walk in on them lol.
Is this the end? or is there going to be part 3?.
tbc...na? to see what aou gou going to do I hope you have evething planed out.
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn. You are one great lemon writer. That was so hot and so good. You have to continue this in the bedroom. Don\'t you dare tease us. Please update soon. Terrific job.
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe, i love ty/ka fics, especially ones that take place in the shower! ^^ i would like to see a 3rd chapter but if that\'s all you want to do then it\'s still really good! well done, good job!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAAAAMN that was hot!!! ^_^ Tykai ROXXX!!! That totyally got me off hehehe ^_^
White Dog
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Jen!
i said i would review here so i am^^ I like it, i like it a lot!! LOL Nah, really- it is great^^ Wicked in fact. Totally awesome.
okies well i am going now^^;;
be safe
-BG
i said i would review here so i am^^ I like it, i like it a lot!! LOL Nah, really- it is great^^ Wicked in fact. Totally awesome.
okies well i am going now^^;;
be safe
-BG
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Jen! *waves* Yummy... TyKa lemon! Ah, you know I love this one...and you!! *hugs*