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for Have You Ever

by Kali

person Raven\'s Light
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
R.L: an update!!!
Aero: uh... woot woot?
R.L: nooo!! WOOT WOOT!!!
Aero: -_- eh...
R.L: *does FFVII Selphie imitation* hehehe... XD
Aero: *horrified* oh dear god no!!!
R.L: *pumps fist in air* BOOOOOYAAAAH!!! HAHAHA!!
Aero: *taps ears* well i haven\'t gone deaf. yet.
R.L: ^_~
Aero: anyways take all that as a compliment... she\'s a bit hyper.
R.L: always am! always will be!!!
Aero: help me!
R.L: oh come on. you know you love me.
Aero: so! the story was good and i liked it and i\'m pretty sure *blinks* raven over there liked it too.
R.L: got that right! WOOOO!!!
Aero: uh... maybe if i close my eyes... -_o nope still there... *sigh*
R.L: well sayonaras!!! update soon!!!!!!
person Dragonblade
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You got banned from ff.net? I LOVE YOU!! LMAO You\'re my Hero!
You Canadian? Weather fucking sucks up here...bloody cold!
Leather...you are a god! Lovely mental pictures of yummy Rei and Kai in tight ass (no pun intended) leather! I like everyone\'s response to the no underwear comment, especially Rei\'s. I\'m only on chapter 12 but I love it totally!! And you are slowly turning me into a KaixTakao fangirl...and I\'m a ReixKai girl...*shakes fist* lol, joking! I noticed the chemistry between Kai and Takao, but I just prefered the neko-jin...
I love your fics!!! Keep up the good writting! I worship a good beyblade fanfic writter *bows*
~Dragonblade
person Rebecca
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so much, it\'s actually the fic that turned me into the TyKa supporter that I am today. The plot is really good, as is the characterisation. Well done!
person Horizont
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

Wow, this ist quite lond, it took me more than a week to read it all! But: I do like it very much! ^_^x
I prefered Kai/Ty earlier, but after reading your fic I\'m convinced that Kai makes a wonderful Uke!
(Kai: I do _what_?)
neway, I can\'t wait to read on, so: CONTINUE!
(There was something in one of the chapters that caught my eye though... \"Come for me, my Phoenix. Come and know who it is that fills you like this and loves you right down to my soul.” - shouldn\'t it be \"his soul\" then, since he says fills and loves in stead of fill and love, too? Well, I\'m not sure. ^^;;

So, that\'s about it, ja ne! ^_^x
Horizont
person Funkegirl
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I have to say that I love this story. Love it. *nods* Now you just gotta write more. And when you do, I\'ll be waiting. *rubs hands in glee* Oh yes... I will.... *grins* Can\'t wiat to see what the boys are fully capable of.
person Jen*not logged on*
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*ish floating in the realms of the kaity dreamworld*............... what a magnificent view i got here!!!!! oh yeah!!!!*watches tykai cuddle i the big big bed*. hehehehe groovy^^ LOL hmm mm very very delish chap Kali&*****(glomp) i loved it by heart!!!1 mou hehehe i like the idear of dranzer and goon bickering like their masters can do*scowls at Kai and tyson who just shrug*............*waves hand at them* yeah yeah be like that lazy bums!!!! hehe anyway pls pls pls update the next installment soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hug

Jen
person Raven\'s Light
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
R.L: FF.net is evil...

Aero: *hisses*

R.L: wish i could do that...

Aero: it pays to be a dragon.

R.L: guess so. well these past few chapters are very good as they always are FireKali.AeroAero: suck up.

R.L: hmpf. she\'s my favorite Beyblade author!

Aero: so i\'ve heard.

R.L: \'course. you are my muse after all.

Aero: true. anyway... i also enjoy this story.

R.L: i was ready to go on a muderous rampage when i went to check if you updated on FF.net and it said \"story not found\".

Aero: evil... EVIL!

R.L: sucks that you lost all those reviews...

Aero: are we done reviewing yet?

R.L: i guess... why?

Aero: shouldn\'t you be working on your story...?

R.L: @_@! ack!

Aero: uh... i guess that means g\'bye.

R.L: yea. sayonara!
person beybladejade
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi kali it\'s me agai great job on this fic too, this fic is my favourite fic of all time, keep it up.
person CrazyJen
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo Kali^^

hehehehe well okay this is gunna be a looong review cuz its for aaaallllllllllll the yummie chapters of HYE!!!! Cuz this ficcie ROCKS big time You know how much i love this story and its getting interesting each chapter i swear!! Lol And you lemons are downright yummie , thetre are gunna be more lemons in here ne????????/ Cuz i love the way you write seme tyson!!!*hearty eyes* Cmon!!! herheh cxant wait for therest of the storie becuz i wanna knoiw what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okies i gtg now Kali upload fastly and WELCOME to aff!!! hehehe oh yeah lets have some fun and upload lotsa tykai goodness!! YAY! *waPompPompoms*

Luv ya!!
Jennifer
person CrazyJen
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mou i cant helo myself i just had to review this!!!!! LL oooh nice bed and STRNG TOoooooOOO!!!! LL well it has to be with those two swinging it on like rabbits hehehehee LL Write more!!!! And MG the battle was magnifique^^

Jen

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