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Hey there! ^_^x

Well, I read the first four chapters now, and since it\'s getting really really late and I have to get up early tomorrow (scratch that, totay) I tht I t I might as well leave a little review before sleeping. ^^;;
I got here after watching the first few episodes of V-Force (which just started here in Germany). That brought me back to all that Beyblade-sruff that was somehow forgotten since the end of the first season. Neway, in order to read something about the most adorabla bishi worldwide (Kai - do I have to metion that?) I quit reading Yu-Gi-Oh! for a second to get me some Beyblade-yaoi-fics. First one I started readingw as yours and - WOW IT\'S DEFINITELY GREAT!!! *waves hands like crazy* There\'s so much Kai in it, and he even has an emotional part without getting completely ooc.
So, thx for writing it, I\'ll see if I can continue tomorrow and I\'ll leave you another review when I\'m finished. ^_^x

Ja ne
Horizont

PS: True? Kai\'s going to lose Dranzer? Can\'t be!!!! *cries madly*
PPS: Yamachi rulez! (Still, I haven\'t read Digimon for quite a while ^^;;)

This prologue was really what made me fall for this fic!! Yes yes I am love with the fic Kali (y\'know I gotta be when I come review this all again) What I loved about this beginning was really the flow of it. Tyson, Kai and everyone else was in character and it seemed like the right place for another series to start!

^^ Tyson and Kai\'s relationship is truly wonderful with the chapter!! You outdid youself on taking on such a big project!! Anywayz, Kai\'s building of trust in Tyson was great with the way you did it through him having nightmares and I just cann\'t get over the way you had the attraction subtely there! (When Kai was yelling at Tyson to wake up) Really a masterpiece! I can\'t believe they took it down!

Oh again I loved this chapter really badly! Many fics out there make a romance fic with teenagers but the character don\'t seem to act or talk like teenagers at ALL. You\'ve really got da power for Tyson and Kai\'s reactions to moves the other makes!! And man Kali I completely fizz whenever I read the part of Kai\'s daymare, and Tyson\'s comfort. HE WOULD MAKE SUCHA GREAT BOYFRIEND! I am so jealous of Kai! Oh, oh and again their dialogue is perfecto!

Wahahahahahaha! The pajama\'s! Oh the choice of pajama\'s!! Always liked that! OOh and it\'s so true that Tyson worries about Kai the most! He loves him so much!! AHA! AAnd I never got a copy of that blackmail photo! Maybe I\'ll draw one for ya?? If ya\'d like me to I\'ll draw whatever ya want. (eer not that I\'m that great...) *grins* TyKa fans gotta help each other out when things like stupid banning happen. THIS CHAPTER WAS MY FAVOURITE. SO ROMANTIC AND CUTE AND FUNNY AND M M GOOD! ^_~ Kaibell\'s Soup!! hehe! Spicy spicy Kai and Tyson

WHOA WHAT!? AW MAN A PAGE!? -__- OK THIS WAS MY OTHER FAVOURITE CHAPTER! Guess I will go to the groups and read it again because it was SO EXCELLENT! It is such a damn shame they took this story down, because it is not all sexual situations! It is a love story and adventure! A true masterpiece for the Tyson/Kai fandom!!

Grr hated review box that cut off my review for the first time this chapter went up. OK here\'s my 2nd time tellin ya what I thought bout it! (Hahahah my reviews are a p a paragraph long h_H) The Rei thing was a shockin plot twist but ya handled it well and I\'m glad I didn\'t kill ya lolol, but how could I kissha wha wonderful person? Anywayz, the powers... this is way more than I coulda ever hoped for in an R fic. usually it\'s hard to find those without blood and angst and all that bad stuff, but this is just a story that really deserves to have those 250 reviews back and MORE. I hope anybody readin this review right here will do the same as me if ya really love this fic, and make Kali feel better by reviewin again. It don\'t take much time, and the fic really is worthy. lolol Tyson and Kai\'re TASTAY...!! *drool drool* love da kissin

Oh that Wyatt is up to somethin\' I\'m sure... But I STILL CANT FIGURE OUT THE MEANIN\' OF THE TITLE! ONE DAY KALI! ONE DAY!!Anywayz... *smiles happily* The way you write Tyson and Kai\'s interaction with each other is so cute and couple-like but not overly done. (It ain\'t like you made one act like a total girl and the other a guy) They\'re still in character and they\'re in love and it\'s completely believable! (Heh well, course it IS TyKa so no dah it\'s believable)Oh man tho, You totally kept the TyKa hot and reactive without getting too sappy. Just the way Beyblade love should be! - Your Ranma

*drools uncontrollably and Kali\'s inbox fills with it* Oh baby just the idea of kenny in leather makes me go WO-ah ahem. *coughcough*Wahahahah Kai knows just what to say to make Tyson go red as a beet, huh? Lol your dialogue has gotta be one of the things I love most bout you\'re writin\'. OOh and the bitbeasts, VERY original way to use them in a fic. And it\'s always made me so curious as how you were gonna factor that inta the circuit... and Black Dranzer, man, Kali, you weave a plot so intricate I wish I could do that. This really is one of my favourite stories.- Ranma

*hemorhagging* SHIRTLESS TYSON!! OH GOD THE VERY IMAGE OF HIM TAKIN\' OFF HIS SHIRT!! AND HIS BODY! GAH *dies from overload**bolts up* WAH! SEXY TATTOOS! Gawd *nosebleed* Tyson\'s is so damn sexy. Really love the imagery in this chapter. It makes your imagination work overtime into picturing something that\'s like right out a episode in the anime, only with better animation lolol. - Ranma