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by Kali

person Ranma
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love that bed talk. Gramps is back! woohoo!! Yeah I missed him, and I liked his reaction, and how you had Tyson and Kai completely comfortably with their relationship by the end of the chapter! That really is a touch thing to get by, but ya pulled it off fantastically!Oh yeah and I absolutely LOVED! The way you did that scene of just the two of them on the school rooftop. Heheh ^_^!- Ranma
person Ranma
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wahah, *grins* Well Mr. D didn\'t seem too surprised with Tyson and Kai, but I think he figured it from the beginning huh? ^_~Tyson and Kai\'s banter in this chapter was way great, it\'s always new and nothin repetitive which is one of the reason\'s why this fic is an excellentay read! Course lotsa people already knew that lol...and... well.. *brain damage* le-leathos--eleal leather? oo la la!- Ranma
person Ranma
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter... was a real hot read. - Ranma

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