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for Without You

by Kali

person Kiotana
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! n.n
Awesome lemon as usual. Gifted with the smut you are.
I love how they were having a snowball fight and it turned into that! It made me all giddy inside... then sad when it went all emoTyson... lots of tears... and I laugh at the OOC babe/baby vocabulary Kai has for Tyson. XD
Great job.
person akari
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww... That is so sweet. A little bit of angst, and then fluff with smut, and finally a nice ending to round it up. :) Though I do find Kai a bit OOC though, what with all the "baby" and "love". But love can change people anyway.
person tyson
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool i like the way where tyson and kai are a couple
person Liah
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent story! poor tyson nearly killing himself tho! Idiot! lol

Liah xx
person Hannah
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should pass out from exhaustion hun! Youwork so hard! I can see how much effort you put into your fics. Yes you do write alot but I wouldn\'t have it any other way! ^_-

Hannah
person Riece
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it it twas really sweet and just down right awsome there the cutest couple *sighs* any ways back to reading the other fics buhbye
person Dragonblade
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was just too damn cute!! Loved it, like I love all of your beyblade fics! Ja!
person beybladejade
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaah finally i can review your great masterpeices, this fic is great, and may i ask for your help on my tyka cos i seem to be brain dead in the idea department. anyhoo great fic.
person CrazyJen
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* I read this ficcie like a hundred times already and it still makes me cry the way Ty kun thinks at the end of this chaptter!!O_O!!! Mou ty kun dun worry!!!!!!1 It\'ll be alright!@!!!!!
Mou GREAT! hehe lol

Luv Jen
person CrazyJen
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*________________________*..........................................@_______________________@ .........................................................*idiotic screaming running around waving a lemony TyKai banner* &squeeeeeeeeee!!!!* mwuahahahahahah! LL in other words hehehe the lemon was very juicy and i loved it but u know that , u also know im crazy so i had better leave noe *idiotic Grin8

Luv ya Jen

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