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I love this story!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!

Wow, this story is absolutely fricken incredible. It's so hard to find a GOOD Vegeta/Piccolo, and this one is just perfect. It's really well written and all the characters are done just right ^^ *shakes fist* damn your talent.

AND DAMN YOU NOT POSTING THE NEXT CHAPTERS YET! DO IT NOW! *huff* *whines*

Oh please update this soon, I really want to know why poor piccolo was scared to be uke, hehe i had to reread that last chapter again cause its so great hope to see more chapters like that one

excellent fanfic - i read and loved the original, and i'm so happy to see that the revised edition is coming up quickly ^_^ looking forward to your new chapter of KTD also - any idea on how many chapters it's going to be? anyway, this is an excellent fic, and i hpe to see more updates soon. oh! and are you planning on updating this fic and KTD at the Beyond Wonderland Archive?

Y'know. I think I'm finding the re-write a helluvalot more interesting than the original, though I still have it...somewhere... Still curious how you're going to do Piccolo's past, I remember we were talking about that a little while back. Definitely love this, however. A++++

oh my! i'm so glad you've started this again :)
that whole thing with piccolo being afraid to be bottom...is that tied into that chains part in the next part of this series? was poor piccolo sexually abused in his past? cause it seems like that would fit since in the 'chains part' u wrote something about him having a bad past with being tied down and stuff so i'm just curious...yeah so pleeeease update this soon, and KTD since u said u'd have an update for that soon :P hehe great job, luved that whole oral/tailspot/prostate thing hehe vegeta must be tired :P can't wait to read more of ur work, ur still my fav. author :P

I was just wondering if you were going to change the story on Saiyan Hideaway as well? Hope you do because this version is steamy!

Very good story! I just read it and I love it! I hope you keep writing this is a great story!

awwww that was so sweet and hot hehe, it was great how piccolo was afraid to be uke and vegeta understood, please oh please let him get over that fear soon! hehe wanna see some hot namek being fucked by saiyan ;)
please update again soon! can't wait
ur fan! tee hee

Poor Trunks kun!! *sniff* I hope everything turns out okay in the end. Stupid Bulma! UPDATE SOON!!!