rate_review Reviews

Im glad you started writing this again. That was a great chappie. Please keep writing!!!

OOH, THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A STORY....I TRUELY HOPE THAT YOU WILL HOPEFULLY ADD MOR CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY, CAUSE I TOTALY CAN\'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT....I TOTALY LOVE THE PICCALO/VEGEATA PAIRING BY THE WAY...ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K., AND PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC SOOOOON, CAUSE LIKE I SAID CAN\'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.

Please finish this fic! I love it and can\'t wait for the next chapter to come! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing!!!

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Well, I had to stop reading since the idea of Picollo having sex and taking care of Vegeta makes me sick but you DO write EXCELLENTLY. And how original too! I do realize there are a lot of p/v pairings out there, I just never read them for fear of missing the barf bucket but I do have to say, very good from what I\'ve read. You\'re very creative.

Camaro

I read upto chap 13 It ends there! what a rather abrupt end?
I hope there is a sequal indeed or I would hazzard Piccolo AND Vegeta fans will send you nasty letters.

From what I Read this seems to be a very well structured drama indeed!
But I wonder will bulma get what she deserves?
What of Vegeta and Piccolo. And one mustn\'t forgety poor Trunks!
BrianDarksoul~

Ah! This story is one of my faves so I\'m so glad it\'s getting an \"facelift\" so to speak. Unbelievable, but this story is better then the last time I\'ve read it. I can wait to see the rest of the chapters. ~ Kenya

Its still damn good, even as a redo. Love the way its flowing. And as far as OOC, you have to remember this was one of your first stories, if not the first. I think you\'re allowed a bit of leeway as far as OOC goes ^^ And besides, it still makes sense.

Great story. The whole stripper scene with the “getting your eyesed oed out” part, made me laugh so hard it brought tears to my eyes. Well done and keep it up, your an excellent writer.

Really, what can I say? I found this story sometime last night and I haven\'t been able to turn it loose since. It\'s now 8:09 am and I can honestly say sitting up and reading this fic was one of the best things I\'ve done with a night. The story was beautifully written, and while at first, I really couldn\'t see how a V/P pairing could possibility work, you have made a believer out of me. This story was so entertaining, so interesting, so insightful and pure delight to read. I\'m so impressed in fact that I\'ve printed out the story (168 pages in word, thank you very much) and have added it to my list of bedside fan fiction stories. I hope to see more from you.

Kenya