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Hey wut up! shit i just finished reading ur whole story in the last 2 hours nad damn is it good. even though some parts did sound corny but it was funny as hell!! it was weird at first to think of veggy and piccolo together i thought this was a pan and vegeta fic but i wasen disappointed at least i got a good laugh out of it... cant wait to read the sequeal!! keep up the good work!! ill be expecting the next fic to be better!! well im out peace!!

What a wonderful ending!! Awesome!!

Those two were really good. The bachler party was described perfectly. It was so hilarious. Drunk Saiyans...I should have know that they would be total idiots. Great job.

AHHH!!!! It\'s over. That was so good. The best Piccolo/Vegeta fic that I have ever read. Uh...the only one...but still the best. I can\'t wait of the sequel.

I LOVED YOUR STORY, IT WAS ONE OF THE BEST I\'VE EVERD. D. VEGETA IS MY ULTIMATE FAVORITE!!!!!!!!!!! PICCOLO COMES IN SECOND AND I REALLY LOVED WHAT YOU DID WITH THEM!!!!!*you bad, bad, naughty, little, yaoi lover* I WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK!!!!!^_^
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Wow, leave for a weekend and come back to a metric ass load of update. Cool. What was up with you guys this week? Anyway. I loved all of those loverly chapters.

First, Bulma and Billy: That was majorly harsh. Billy is the biggest ass that I have ever read. I can not believe that. You are a genius to even come up with a bastard like that. Evil...Just like Goku said...pure and unadultarated. Poor, Bulma now I feel bad for saying she deserved that. She didn\'t. No one does.

Piccolo and Vegeta: Now at first I was worried about how you would handle the green guy\'s childhood truama. It is hard to picture the Namek in a position like that, but some how you made it believeable. He was the first Namek that anyone of earth had ever seen and even he didn\'t know what he was. Of course the government would have tried to get a hold to him. Eww...and that old dude...he was so sick. And yes there was exessive amount of Vegeta fluffiness, but it was warrented. A good Vegeta sobbing like a child fest is needed in the world every so often.

You did good. Really good.

And here comes the point I like more!!!!Waaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!^_^

*GASP* So much angst!! It was all so gripping and it wouldn\'t let me go! I hate what Piccolo and Bulma went through, but I\'m glad they\'re both going to be okay! Can\'t wait for the nchapchapter!!!

Cool. The Plot is definitely thickening. I am glad in a sick sorta way that things are turning out this way for Bulma. I shouldn\'t be I know but she was so mean to ie. ie. I can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen next.

Nani? What had Billy been doing? And what about Trunk\'s reaction to Piccolo and Vegeta\'s relationship? Hurry with the next chapter!!