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for Unconditional Bonds

by Makota2112

person Anon
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s so sad. How will Vegeta deal with this situation? Thank goodness that he had Piccolo. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person DanaFanel
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Love this fic, you\'re a great author. Plus the fact that Piccolo is in it doesn\'t hurt * drools at the not so jolly green gaint*
person jaygoose
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A lovely chapter. I love Vegeta\'s flow of thoughts. Those were definitely things I would never expect the prince to say out loud. But they gave me a better understanding of pri prince as a person. He really isn\'t very different from everyone else. I love he and Piccolo\'s relationship. Neither one of them have to change who they are to be together. That\'s a good thing.

The lime was greatfeltfelt their pain though. Getting all hot and ready to go only to be interupted. So sad. :(

Now, on to Trunks. I feel for the kid. But I am also just as afraid as Vegeta. I really hope that the boy can get a handle on his emotions before he does something that he regrets. Saiyan blood doesn\'t seem to be something to play with.

Anyway, great fic. I can\'t wait for the next part. :)
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, looks like Billy was the only one to understand where Vegeta was coming from when he wants to see Trunks. I hope Bulma doesn\'t do anything to piss Vegeta off any further concerning their son. I\'m also glad that Vegeta told Trunks the truth about what happened instead of beating around the bush like Bulma did. Can\'t wait to see how Trunks will react to Piccolo and Vegeta being involved with each other. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person jaygoose
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated. I am so glad. That chapter was perfect. I loved the way Vegeta was with Trunks that was great! There is so much detail in your story. It really make everything that much better. I can\'t wait for the next bit. :)
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the way things are working out for those two. But, what about Trunks? What about that situation? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person jaygoose
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again a completely wonderful chapter. I can\'t get enough of this fic, I love Piccolo and Vegeta and them together is even better. I love Piccolo\'s conversations with \'hif\'.f\'. You real get a better understanding of him. I don\'t think that he gets enough attention on the show. He really is a great character. Plus, he was really cool in Dragonball. He very versitile, one minute a villain, the next a Saiyan\'s best friend. Very cool...fic.
person Sarkywoman
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just read this and it is brilliant! You have to carry on, it\'s so rare to see Piccolo and Vegeta trying a romance these days.
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That\'s a eye opener!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person jaygoose
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. It encompasses sny eny emotions at one time. One minute I\'m chuckling, the next I am going \"Aww...That\'s so beautiful.\" And you very thorough, at least from what I can tell. I like how you brought up Vegeta and Piccolo\'s first meeting. I had almost forgot about it. That was a nice bit. I adore this fic...you are writing some more aren\'t you? Please do. I love it.

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