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for On the Corner of West Elm and Bailey

by tinyvoice

person Fallen Angel
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I see you haven't updated this story since March '05, but I hope you have some intention of completeing this! I got completely pulled in, read straight through all the chapters, and I don't think Trowa was OOC at all (you mentioned that in a note in a previous chapter). There were several parts that had me laughing out loud, and teary-eyed when Trowa lashed out at Quatre. Nothing breaks my heart more than a sad/hurt Quatre (and thank you, because some twisted part of me loves to see him tortured, but only followed up with tender resolution). You're writing style is wonderful, I was able to concentrate fully on the story instead of distracting grammar/punctuation mistakes. And your descriptions are superb, I could see everything clearly in my head, and had to turn the lights on since I was reading at night (haha I'm such a wuss when it comes to ghosts). Anyway, REALLY hope you update, you have a great piece going here! Don't leave us hanging! I want to, have to, can't LIVE without the resolution! KUDOS!
person Luna
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do you perhaps have a mailing list for the updates of your story? If you do I would be ever so greatful if you added me. I am very interested to see where this ends, I like it.
person frog and toad
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been looking from corner to webpage to old QxT sites and I didn\'t find any new fics that interested me. I\'m glad I found your page by chance because these two characters are bookmarked as my favorite pairing. You\'re writing, although not flawless, flows without pause. I enjoy your work--there is much substance and I hope that you continue to write more. It\'s gorgeous, really. Awesome.
person sassenach
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very refreshing story. I\'m always pleased to read something that is a little different than everything else out there. Keep up the good work and Please Update soon...
person Sabishii
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
person Maka
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY GOD! Tiny voice! I\'m sorry that I haven\'t reviewed or anything but I haven\'t had my computer in a year and I\'m scared to read the fic\'s here at the library O.O But I keep thinking of your fic all the time!!! I can\'t wait until I can get mr. satan fixed so i can read you ficcy again! I\'m sure it\'s fantastic. ^___^

Maka aka Ryu Nemura
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this. You write with beautiful eloquence and style, and I love your portrayal of Heero and Wu-fei. Duo, of course, is great too. It reminds me a little of Lorena\'s work. Do you know her? If you have loved writing this as much as I have reading it, you\'ll love her stuff too.

Quatre makes a great ghost. It\'s so touching and sad and great and squidgy all at once. I love love love it!

Please write more *sad puppy eyes* or I shall be sad.

Meow.

Tsx
person Shinigami_Lucifer
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly LOVE this story! you must update soon! i can\'t wait, the plot it amazingly written, and the detail can paint soem very lovely pictures. it\'s like watching a movie! i beg of you, update soon!

(goes off to wait for update)
person NautilusL2
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn i hate how they cheat me out of pretzels... bastards. ok - so i like how you started the chapter! Really, it was about bloody damn well time that we got to see some other of our friends. But what of the man on the attic?! What then?!?! And the Wu-mans of it all. And the Duoisms. Wow - yes, very short - glad you updated. mucho gracias. $.85! Man, thats stealing from poor people.... for 12 pretzels... you are narly!
person SantaAna101
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my good God in heaven - YOU LIVE! Praise the lord, hello! I totally did the chapter, very spooky - errie, totally awesome! Im so glad that youre not dead, I was worried for a few long weeks/months. We\'re not worthy! We are worms!! *grovels* Anyways, keep commin with the updates, Im behind you 100 percent! (Go Edward!)

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