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for On the Corner of West Elm and Bailey

by tinyvoice

person NautilusL2
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Wheeze* Oh good God! I would very much like to hide under my covers now, thank you very much. I\'m scared of your nightmare and I always have dreams about the last thing i read, seen or heard and so... blah for me. This is good. I really liked it - liked it alot. I dont know where its goin but I like the fact that its going somewhere, but gahh.... shadow people on the ceilings... no doors... reminds me of the ride Haunted Mansion, you see - Master Gracy (of that is at least who we think it is) was trapped in a room with no windows and no doors, and the room kept stretching upwards. And so, the only way to get out, was to hang himself from the ceiling... man I love disney. So yeah, that reminded me of that. But i really really liked this, its spooky and eerie and I love eerie so.. yeah, go you! Update soon though!
Nautilus
person Ashley
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! I love 3x4\'s and I love ghost storys too. I cant wait for you to update. please update soon!
person ender
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely breathtaking, I enjoyed reading it immensely. I know it has been a long time since you updated, but if you could possibly write me and tell me if you are going to continue with this great story, I would really appreciate it. I just wish it had not ended with Quatre and Trowa relationship on such sad terms. Thank you for writing such an intriguing and wonderful story.
person Alex
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this, but have one MAJOR problem with it...there's no more! I got to chapter twelve and it just ended.

Seriously, the idea with the tearcomicoming jewels was so unique and wonderful. I loved how he's going to have matching necklaces made!

person SariL2
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im so proud of you! You actually updated! This Edward guy seems like a pretty shady character! I cant wait to read what happens next. As to the whole "should i give in am eleborate bg" i would say if you had the time yes, it may make your story really big, but if extra info wont have anything to do with point B then forget about it. Thanks for being a wonderful author- love!
person PINK PLAID ROBOT
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am stuck between two of your stories (Punish, OCWEB). I cannot express how impressed I am with your style. You are incredible! I love the way in which you write Quatre. You leave him all his beauty sans the baby-girlie additude most \"authors\" give him. I love your work! Please, for the sake of all that is good and pure in the world, continue writing!^_^
person SariL2
schedule June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, there are so many ways to say you and your stories rock, but to put it plainly, \"You and your stories rock.\" So there, i would like to say more about the way that your fics make me feel - like im all high strung because of the \'must-have-a-boy-who-lives-in-a-haunted-house-so-i-can-meet-him\' feeling and the wait. So go you!
person Solo\'s Ghost
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is good. I can\'t wait to see what will happen between Trowa and Quatre. :)
person megaotaku (but i\'m too lazy to sign in)
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR WRITTING. I decided that I loved your story with the first two paragraphs. I just read the first four or five lines, turned to the person sitting with me and said, \"I love this story.\" (dead ous,ous, I really said that.) The concept is incredible, and I love the places your taking it. I think the angst was a good anchor (I happen to be a sappy romance person myself) to keep the story on track. You just can\'t write a 20+ chapter story and have it all \"happy happy joy joy.\" I also think that you can make Trowa and Quatre\'s relationship stronger by recovering from that blow. I also loved the way you covered the WTC incedent. Very well written.
person Solo\'s Ghost
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please tellthatthat you are just busy and haven\'t updated lately. Please do not just abandon this fic. I hope you post mre soon. If it is posted somewhere else where it is getting updated I would love to know where.

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