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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! I can\'t wait to read more of what you\'ve got! Too bad though, Trowa depressed poor Quatre! Aw! And maybe you\'re thinking of adding a little 1x2? The ultimate pairing is 3x4 (Yay!) but somehow, something seems missing without a little Heero and Duo lovin\'... O_O;;
Just on a side note, and yes, this is a very small thing... It\'s \"Jehovah\'s\" not \"Jehova\'s\" and Witnesses is capitalized because it\'s a formal name. Now, if you want to add some religious humor and stereotyping (was it humor?) then please be fair and use all religions! After all, where I\'m from, the Mormon\'s come a\'knocking on my door just as much as the JW\'s. So, add in some Mormons knocking on Trowa\'s door (and if they live in Utah) they might be asking for more than just a Bible Study. Add some Catholic Priests coming to Trowa\'s school to scope out the Elementary kids, and maybe even add in some Born Agains shouting about Jesus and waving fish symbols. Not to mention all the Middle Eastern and Asian religions I could possibly get into... ^_^
So, yeah, I know it\'s just me being nit-picky but... if you\'re gonna want to mock/tease/whatever the word you would use is... a particular religion and it\'s habits, then please, be fair and do it for/to all of them.
Just on a side note, and yes, this is a very small thing... It\'s \"Jehovah\'s\" not \"Jehova\'s\" and Witnesses is capitalized because it\'s a formal name. Now, if you want to add some religious humor and stereotyping (was it humor?) then please be fair and use all religions! After all, where I\'m from, the Mormon\'s come a\'knocking on my door just as much as the JW\'s. So, add in some Mormons knocking on Trowa\'s door (and if they live in Utah) they might be asking for more than just a Bible Study. Add some Catholic Priests coming to Trowa\'s school to scope out the Elementary kids, and maybe even add in some Born Agains shouting about Jesus and waving fish symbols. Not to mention all the Middle Eastern and Asian religions I could possibly get into... ^_^
So, yeah, I know it\'s just me being nit-picky but... if you\'re gonna want to mock/tease/whatever the word you would use is... a particular religion and it\'s habits, then please, be fair and do it for/to all of them.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I\'ve read chapters 1 through 10 in one sitting. I\'m totally enthralled in this story! I love the characterizations and the plot. I\'m new to Gundam Wing, Harry Potter being my fave fandom, but have loved all the stories I\'ve read so far. Duo has been my favorite of the boys until now. You\'re portrail of Trowa is wonderful! I think I\'m in love! lol
As for chapter 10, I think you\'ve done an incredible job of portraying the shock and sadness of that day. Keeping the political and religious views out is the best way to go about it. After all, it wasn\'t so much about politics or religion, but individual emotions. Wonderfully done! I\'m anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :D
Taran
As for chapter 10, I think you\'ve done an incredible job of portraying the shock and sadness of that day. Keeping the political and religious views out is the best way to go about it. After all, it wasn\'t so much about politics or religion, but individual emotions. Wonderfully done! I\'m anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :D
Taran
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Strong... yeah. Just strong. I don\'t really think I can review on this.
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will the other G-boys get to go to the house again!? Will there be some more Quatre history?! I really like quatre history. I really think Duo and Q-man should meet! they seem to get along (even though they have not been together... or have they??) And yeah! And the Trowa non-sociality of it all! And the... waking up at 5:30 and the Cathy of it all!!!! Yeah... just a few more words.. that was it.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a brilliant story! im more of a fan of duoxheero but this is fantastic! okay, um in this
story,is wufei and heero gay? they seem to act like it....many times......any~~~ways keep
on fighting for all of your loyal readers...oh and um i decided to review just now because
i didnt want to stop reading the story! duo-chan enjoyed it too!^_^
duo: i love this story ,but i wish that i would go out with hee-chan...once yot hot hooked on
those yaoi stories about me and the perfect soldier, it kinda makes you want more....teehee
- shikaru and duo maxwell
story,is wufei and heero gay? they seem to act like it....many times......any~~~ways keep
on fighting for all of your loyal readers...oh and um i decided to review just now because
i didnt want to stop reading the story! duo-chan enjoyed it too!^_^
duo: i love this story ,but i wish that i would go out with hee-chan...once yot hot hooked on
those yaoi stories about me and the perfect soldier, it kinda makes you want more....teehee
- shikaru and duo maxwell
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
in correspondance to my last review{i hope that the review i gave youl hel help you out as to so many other reviews that you have read
duo: what she said.....}
duo: what she said.....}
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the way Trowa\'s paast is developing thats cool. I can\'t wait till he goes to the house again to see Quatre. I wonder when the others are gonna find out about all of this. Keep up the great writing. :)
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was great. I mean all realtionships have there ups and downs not all are perfect and for as supernatural as this story is it makes it more realistic. I like that. Your writting is fantastic and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.:)
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I\'m glad I decided to check this one out. It seems as though it going downhill for Quat and Tro, but I don\'t care as long as there is more of this story to read. You writing so beautiful, expressive, and discriptive. I can\'t wait to see more from you. ^_^
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So yeah, my computer died (for the 4th time!) and after i revived The Beast the first thing i did was go here to read your new chapter! It rocks so much! kay, question, are Q-man\'s tears supposed to be diamonds or of type of gems/crystal/rock? Cuz i was just a *little* confused on that but then it was all good. OOh yay, someone is on a mean streak - me likes! well i shall read about a lost colony now. thanks for your stories!