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D8 i was just looking through some gundam fanfics and came across this one... -le tear- i swear, this made my eyes slightly water. I loved it. I really hope you continue writting some more fics you know.

That was really good!! but really sad...wonderfully written tho!! keep it up!

There aren\'t very many deathfics I enjoy, but I enjoyed this one. The beginning was odd but very fitting. The shrine gave an almost ethereal touch to Du dea death; fitting because he is a god after all, Shinigami, the God of Death. This was also one of the few, if not only, Hiro-leaves-Duo fanfic where I am not angry at Hiro for doing so. In most fics, it makes me angry at Hiro for doing so; probably because the authors never give a good enough excuse. I don\'t believe \"my training forbades wekaness\" is a good enough enough; it is too cliche. This one, Hiro was confused as to the right road and his personality would demand confirmation and absolute sureness about the decisions he makes. This was very Hiro-ish, in my opinion. However, Duo was also at fault for not having faith. So in a way everyone is punished. Hiro for not saying a word, Duo for not having faith in the one he claims he loves, and the others suffer with the loss of Duo (which they will, as Quatre did, blame Hiro for I\'m sure). I would assume the nexct course of action would the funeral, the prosecution of Hiro, and his own suicide to join hise? He? Hm, who knows? ^_^ I hope to see more from you~!