rate_review Reviews

This is a GREAT story....... You have one grammar mistake though (Well one i can remember), You wrote Ying and Yang..... It´s spelled Yin and Yang

Are you STUPID or whaT!!!!!!!?????????

You just don´t ask people to review your story, not like that.
That is just so fucking stupid, idiot.

Great Chapter even though i dont like the yaoi part

cool. its okay. i\'d really like to know what\'s going to happen to vegeta and bulma though.

i\'ve never been a big fan of yoai, mostly i try to avoid it but that was well done. simple but effective. i like it and i can\'t wait to see where the story heads after this chapter. cheers

I have enjoyed what i have read so far (chapter 1-3) and i am looking forward to reading the rest. A very interesting take on the saiyans i must say though

Hey, I actually haven\'t had time to look at your story since from the summary, it struck me as extremely cliche. But when I was told that I needed to take a look at some of your reviews, it struck me that that probably isn\'t the case. In fact, as a result of your apparent creativity, you\'ve had quite the number of ignorant flamers on your hands.

I just wanted to let you know that I\'ve definitely been there and not to let it get you down, ever. For one, (especially in the case of this Julicia.. God, what a loser) most of your flamers are extraordinarily incompetent. I\'d say the better part of your flamers are spoiled children who wanted the same old stupidity that fanfiction writers have been dissecting for years now, and when not essentially \'getting what they wanted\', they lashed out like assholes in an attempt to get you down. I\'m really glad to see that it never worked and that you\'ve finished this regardless of the shit and hassles you were dealt in the process.

But even looking at your other stories it really strikes me that you\'ve had more than your share of dickheads and I just wanted to reassure you that if you ever need help or encouragement, that I\'m more than happy to take care of that. Don\'t ever let it get you down and keep on writing.

It seems that you have fans that genuinely care about you and felt the need to come to me with their concerns. At this point, I sincerely don\'t have time to read over your story but if there is one thing that I\'m a sucker for, it\'s creativity and that seems to be the aspect you were attacked most frequently for. You should be proud that you don\'t fit the mold they wanted you to conform to and that you NEVER bowed down and wrote the story when and how they felt you ought to. Go you and if you ever need anything, let me know.

Camaro

It\'s there.

UPDATE! god! I have been reading this for 3 days strait and you cant just leave it like this. ;_;

you have too update soon or els will i cry ^-^ and love your storie