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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when do there come a new chapter??? we all have weit soo long! update soon
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dont no why the hell it takes u so long 2 keep writeing but keep going
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I can\'t say much against Slave, it certainly is unique. xD I seriously can\'t wait until Bulma and Vegeta meet again... o.o Mmm, I wonder if that makes me sadistic, since we all know what Veggie\'s gunna do when he gets a hold of poor Bulma. UNLESS he has a change of heart suddenly... Which sounds really doubtful to me. Ouu... I\'m going to end up wondering this until you bring out the next chapter! Take your time, though. xD I have your other works to occupy me. This is just my favorite.
Well, I\'ll be going now. This really is a wonderful fic. ^^
- Aye
Well, I\'ll be going now. This really is a wonderful fic. ^^
- Aye
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really like this fanfic, would you mind writing more? It\'s such a great read! ^__^ I was wondering are Bulma and Vegeta really going to get together? Cause it seems that Brolly has plans to take Bulma for himself.. And I\'m a little confused..did Kakkarot kill Bardock? @_@ Thanks for reading my review and keep writing those GREAT stories of yours! =D
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeek! eeeeee! ew! 5x ew! daughter and papi doing it! dat\'s just ew! ew! i wan momy...
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellant Fic
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
Its all I could sat to it... I never imagined... My mind went pop at it all... Insperation in its own... Keep up the good work.
Its all I could sat to it... I never imagined... My mind went pop at it all... Insperation in its own... Keep up the good work.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like your story very much!
Please write more!!
Please write more!!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really liked the story DETH, I like a store that is really outrages and violent. However I would love to read a story where the “slaves” were not Goth, but rather really pretty girls in bohemian dresses. Or dressed in beautiful Indian cloths…
Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…
Wow I really liked the story DETH, I like a store that is really outrages and violent. However I would love to read a story where the “slaves” were not Goth, but rather really pretty girls in bohemian dresses. Or dressed in beautiful Indian cloths…
Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…
PS I AM working on a new drawing for you, for this story, but it will take me a long time to do it good, as I too am really busy. Do you still have the one I did a Bulma arms tied behind her back in chains and censored? I think this one will be better ^0^ I also love how my fav music inspires you to write, and I can’t want till you write a storied based on my fav NIN song “we’re in this together” don’t have a clue what you would do but I’m sure it will be good. Love the fact that this fanfic reaches out to me so personally in SO many ways PLEASE keep up the good work!
Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…
Wow I really liked the story DETH, I like a store that is really outrages and violent. However I would love to read a story where the “slaves” were not Goth, but rather really pretty girls in bohemian dresses. Or dressed in beautiful Indian cloths…
Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…
PS I AM working on a new drawing for you, for this story, but it will take me a long time to do it good, as I too am really busy. Do you still have the one I did a Bulma arms tied behind her back in chains and censored? I think this one will be better ^0^ I also love how my fav music inspires you to write, and I can’t want till you write a storied based on my fav NIN song “we’re in this together” don’t have a clue what you would do but I’m sure it will be good. Love the fact that this fanfic reaches out to me so personally in SO many ways PLEASE keep up the good work!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really liked the story DETH, I like a store that is really outrages and violent. However I would love to read a story where the “slaves” were not Goth, but rather really pretty girls in bohemian dresses. Or dressed in beautiful Indian cloths…
Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…
PS I AM working on a new drawing for you, for this story, but it will take me a long time to do it good, as I too am really busy. Do you still have the one I did a Bulma arms tied behind her back in chains and censored? I think this one will be better ^0^ I also love how my fav music inspires you to write, and I can’t want till you write a storied based on my fav NIN song “we’re in this together” don’t have a clue what you would do but I’m sure it will be good. Love the fact that this fanfic reaches out to me so personally in SO many ways PLEASE keep up the good work!
Lol because then I could relate to it more, but the fact is, its not really out there to fined. So I guess out of all the “slave” stories yours is by far the BEST. I like the fact that you plan on splitting the story up in to 3 parts, and that it will be so big, it feels like I am reading more of an armature novel rather then a fanfic on the inter net of some young girls little BDSM/rape fantasies. And it REALLY is in so much depth and I just love how there is a story in this,,… but I love even more the rape stories, I have loved them since I was little, that is the only way you keep me interested in the story…
PS I AM working on a new drawing for you, for this story, but it will take me a long time to do it good, as I too am really busy. Do you still have the one I did a Bulma arms tied behind her back in chains and censored? I think this one will be better ^0^ I also love how my fav music inspires you to write, and I can’t want till you write a storied based on my fav NIN song “we’re in this together” don’t have a clue what you would do but I’m sure it will be good. Love the fact that this fanfic reaches out to me so personally in SO many ways PLEASE keep up the good work!