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by vegetagoddess

person DA
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo WOOO!!! That was tasty man! Lol. Almost what my dreams are like... JK! LOL! To some extent.. :P
person DA
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im a readin\', and Im a likin\'! Lol... That was pretty cheezy but I couldnt help it. Im running out of whitty things to say!
person DA
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Starts humming the Lord of the Rings theme song* Its getting pretty adventureous eh? Lol
person DA
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot woot. Hm, I read that one pretty fast... YAY!!! Its not like me to read so fast... I like to imagine everything and portray voices and all.. Lol. Im not crazy I swear!
person DA
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Brolly\'s great! You should let him do a girl... that poor guy is in dier need of it! LOL!
person DA
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Love the chappy\'s! Your a kick arse writer! Nicely done... *thinks of ther complements* Im all out.. Lol. Must read on though!

Dark Angel
person DA
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sings the McDonalds song \"Im lovin\' it!\" Lol. Must... keep... reading... AHH!H!!!HHH!H!H Woot.

*Falls on her face as she reaches for the next chapter*

DA
person DA
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thought you might like a review.. Lol. I know I like them.. when I actually write. >D Anywho, Im going to keep reading, I hate having to stop.. Lol

DA
person ninjakitty
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was rather fucked up but enjoyable all at once. Can\'t wait to see where this story is heading. Cheers!
person Julicia
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont want Bulma to have that ugly thing Freeza\'s baby. Thats retarded to put that in the story because Freeza isnt gaining anything from it. I hate when you do good on a story and then go fuck it up with some dumb shit like planting another embryo in Bulma. Fix the story please i dont want Bulma having that nasty slimy slither fucks baby. Change it other people probably hate it too.

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