rate_review Reviews

You actually put that stupid second embryo in Bulma. Your mucking up the story you ignaramous fart. FIX IT NOW FIX IT NOW FIX IT NOW. YOU UGLY TRAMPESE ANIMAL.

Why are you going through with this Freeza baby thing I dont want her to have Freeza\'s nasty baby. CHANGE IT NOW THE NEXT TIME YOU WRITE THE STORY PUT IT THE WAY IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE. BULMA AND VEGETA ONLY NOT DUMB DUMB DIDDY AND WHAT NOT.

Why the hell are you making Vegeta gay thats just sick the two girls is alright but Vegeta and Kakorot and Brolly thats just so fucking sick. You fucked the story up with vegeta being a fagat that shouldnt be. Then Freeza ugly ass trying take away Bulma\'s baby thats is so fucking stupid. Dont try to write back to me about telling me I shouldnt read the chapter its a good story but not the part when Vegeta and Brolly and Kakorot are being gay. Your probably gay your self. Quit getting carried with the story just because people like it. If you ever make a story again dont put fagots in there. If I saw you right now i would fucking puke in your face you nasty fuck. Vegeta isnt gay Kakorot isnt gay niether is Brolly you stupid ass hair.

great keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice story ^^ but it is over.???.. because there are no updates (sorry for my bad english)

.... keep writeing

This story is awesome. I like the part when Vegeta didnt want to drink the sweet wine. It is a very great story and keep writing more and more. Okay

Vegeta is one year older than Bulma if hasnt been in the hyberbolic time chamber. Bulma isnt way younger than Vegeta. Write me back or i aint reading this damn story no more.

Very intresting. I must continue reading.

wtf how long is it gonna be befor u put some morre chaps up ive been waiting 4 3 weeks