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keep writing

This concept is one that has been done many times, yet I find that yours is original and well-written enough that it holds my interest. Good job.

I think i\'ve only found 2 fanfics that trully caught my full attention (and as u can see, thats not an easy thing to get from me), and \"SLAVE\" was one of those two and its inserted in my section of long story ranking.
I\'ve kept coming here everyday to check out on more new chapters, cause u been handling pretty well with that story line and i wanna see how ur gonna manage things till the end of the story. Pretty good descriptions (im not talkin bout the lemon ones! though they\'re good too;oP) of the places. I particularly liked the reception at planet Vegeta and so many other parts that i have no time to write about now. So, anyway, keep up the good work and please dont die till u finish it! And that is an order!!!
Good luck on everythin else...

That was a great chapter! This is an amazing fic and it just gets better and better! I can\'t wait to read more, please update as soon as possible!

This is an awesome fic, I love it. I haven\'t gotten very far into it yet but it is wonderful so far. Great Job

Man, i really have to congratulate u for the amazing peace of work u been witting! I think most of all have been said on other reviews, but u seem to want more (and I understand why). So ,here I am to tell u to continue that story, with a great and original story line!
I also love ur descriptions in the story, u r pretty good at it, besides u have a great imagination. the way u write things and describes them makes me feel like if i was there, i can really put a picture of it in my mind!
GREAT WORK! DON\'T STOP WRITTING! I WANT THAT NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!!

Hey! I\'m hopelessly addicted to this story! I check to see if it\'s updated all the time! It rocks, and I can\'t wait for another chapter to be posted <33

I really love the Slave story. I just seem to have a problem with my computer and it cuts off the last bits off each chapter and sometimes it cuts off in the middle of a sentence or lemon. Lemons are my favorite part of the story. Please write lots more. Thank you much.

PLEASE FINISH ITS SOOO GOOD!

i love it! i hope you can get the next chapter out asap!