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by vegetagoddess

person Anon
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a pretty good story untill bulma ran away and stuff. PLEASE change it back to vegeta/bulma!
person marron1
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have so far loved your story. Considering I always thought that a story like this would drive me away. I just started reading it and got hooked so far I made to chapter 5. I tend to read all your stories about Bulma and Vegeta keep them coming.

Marron1
person Moonlight Shadow
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW i didnt expect that to happen

*does a happy dance* you finally updated!! i am so happy.

i actually think it would be better to split it up in 3 parts. but its your decion if you want to do so.

good luck and i am impatiently waiting for the next chapter
person elvenangel
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know....I should find this disturbing, but I find myself in the same place as Bulma so to speak. I should but I don\'t. Guess your audience is as perverse as you are lol. I mean that in the best possible way. I had starting reading this a long time ago on ff.net but I didn\'t want the edited version. Now I found it again and am reading the GOOD version lol. I never got to see what really happened so I can\'t wait to finish it but I had to give you a review first since I as an author know they are are as vital as thirst *smirk*. I love Vegeta so much, man he\'s my favorite character.
elvenangel
person meredith
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
youre storys are amazing i love reading them please keep righting i am so hocked on youre story
person ctv
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
person BB~Lauren
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this fic is really addictive and I love all I\'ve read so far!!! Please update as soon as possible! I know I\'m not the only one asking that XD!
Thanxs heaps..

BB~Lauren
~Bulma~Lauren~
person Zac Imam
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a REALLY good fic. I like the way things have turned out. I just wonder what could happen to Vegeta because he is nowhere nearly as powerful as Frieza or her daughter. Keep updating!!!
person Ris
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH MAN POOR VEGETA! I HATE THAT HE HAD TO SLEEP WITH THE SHREW! I HOPE BULMA GETS WELL FOR VEGETA!!! PLEASE FINISH!!!!! :-D
person Moonlight SHadow
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg!!! you must update soon! because i must know what happens!!! bulma and vegeta deserve each other!!!

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