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by vegetagoddess

person pimp
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
greai fic i like how you really get in the mind of them in details
person Moonlight Shadow
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well written chapter once again!
person moonlight shadow
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is by far the best v/b fic ever!! i will continue to read this wonderful piece!!!
person DarkBug
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it snd cant wait for the next chapter. short, sweet, and simple. lol.
person ICY CHIC
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*TEARS* noooooooooooooooooooO PLEASE DON'T GO TO mm. FOR GOOD! WELL I GUESS IT'S ONLY A SITE AWAY, BUT I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL. I ENJOY REVIEWS 2. BUT YOUR WORK IS REALLY GOOD AND THAT IS MESSED UP HOW YOU ONLY HAD E-MAILS, BUT JUST KEEP DOING YOU THING HERE, I LOVE THIS STORY! 200 OUTA TEN LOL. GREAT JOB.
person SeeDWAgweenPaNdA
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello Vegeta Goddess! ^^
I just finished all your 36was was it 35 or maybe 37? Ohh well!! I finshed all your chapers on "Slave" Very well written!! I love it! Well that one chaper that you felt kinda weirded out on writting...Well is gos good dun worry! I dun know when i finished reading that i was amazed on how well it was written...And it was well written! ^^ Well i love to read some more...It a real nail bitting fan fiction...(The best i have read! In awhile!) -Waits for the next chapter as patiently as she can wait- >< I dun know if i can hold on anymore!! >
person Twilight-Abyss
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I fell behind in reading this story but I'm all caught up again now. I had to read through about a ten chapter marathon to catch up but I enjoyed it every step of the way. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.

~Kira~
person Rae
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i check at least evryday of the week to see if youre updating. maybe ive become attached to your story. who knows? but i hope you update soon. i cant wait to see what zucchini is goin to do. please hurry im dyin to know. also this is the longest fanfic i read il thl the fanfics ive ever read. i review stories for my friend and most of them get writers block, but you are good at creating a storyline. keep up the good work! yours is the best i read so far. update soon and ill talk ta ya later. siyanara
person Dark_Kaoru
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.. Man this fic is tottally blow-minded!, specially this last chapter. I, indeed saw Zuchinni as a ho' but, now I realize she also has a secret life.... and a secret lover too!haha.. I wonder if its Kakarot?? well, guess I'll have to wait till next chapter.

Please dont take too long, I'll be waiting :) keep going, you're doing great.
person Ikata
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on people, how do you flame an Alternate Universe story anyways?! #1. Heed the warnings. If two chicks start kissin, and you don't like that, skip the chapter! #2. If you made it this far in the story, and have a problem with the story as a whole, that's your problem. You should have stopped reading when you first found that you had a problem with it. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, suggestions.... Remember those? Which, I found a few of, but I still think it's a wonderful story. That mailing list you were talking about... Can you add me to it pretty please? How long have you been working on this story? It's long... You ever plan on ending it? LOL.

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