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Loved this, I wish there was more, got to the end like 'Where is the rest!?' Would love more chapters.

Update. This story is interesting.

Oh I really really really hope you'll write more!! I have been reading your story over the past couple of days and I couldn't stop reading!! It's been the best story I have to say that I've read in a LONG time!! So PRETTY PLEASE, write more!!!!!!

Okay so first of all.. YOU'RE THE BEST FANFIC WRITER OUT THERE. Please please please continue this! I hope you haven't forgot about this.. This story is to damn good to forget. I have read it till the end my 9th time and it will never get old. I just love this book to the core! Pleasepleaseease continue! It would mean the world to me!

this is the best bulma/vegeta story i have read. sad that i only chance upon this now... hope to see an update soon...

I have basically stayed up and ignored all my responsibilities as a mom, student and wife to read this. I love it! Keep it comming!

Hi, I REALLY like the story. You two did an awesome job! Some of the sex scenes were a bit too much, but I kept on reading because of the anticipation of what would happen next! That is why I must ask you: Are you going to continue writing this story, or is it finished? Vegeta is a total douchebag, and I believe you two should definitely find a way for Kakarot, to keep Bulma all to himself, and make Vegeta pay for what he did to them both! :-)

WOW this story is so engrossing, I read all the chapters in one sitting! I've read many B/V fanfics that portray Vegeta as a little cruel and sadistic but never have I read one like this where he was THIS twisted! You've given the name "dark prince" a whole new meaning. You really WENT there. I must admit, I was a bit apprehensive about the yuri, the yaoi and the incest but in some sick twisted way it all makes sense and fits into the story perfectly, it didn't seem like it was just thrown in needlessly. As I read all the chapters I did notice all the constant excuses you had made about not finishing the story and I thought how lucky as was to have bypassed all of that, and would get the finished story...WRONG lol you must finish this story, you've really got something here and you must continue, I hope you plan to. Of course I want to see what happens next! I'm very intrigued by this and I won't satisfied til I've read the story to completion!

Wow, this fanfic realy captured me, I just read all capitels without interuption! :D But I noticed that some capitels doesnt have a content. Where they deleted? I would like to read all of them. Well apart from that, very very good work! A story how I like it. It really isnt that easy to find something like that. I really appreciate that you uploaded this and hope you continue writing!

PS: I have to admit that after a short time reading, I imagined that the story was about another couple and not about Bulma and Vegeta...They were my heroes since childhood and over the years I really took them to my heart, so I just couldnt stand imagining Bulma suffering like this! I also always adored Vegetas dark and cruel personality (I was a bad 10 year old girl! xD ) but this version of him was way too hardcore for me!^^
But don't bother, I can't wait to know how the story continues! ;)

Been waiting so long for updates for this. XD Where are ya girly? Your fans wanna know what happens!