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by vegetagoddess

person Harlequin
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've never seen anyone do such a good job on stories like this. o.o I am in complete awe... I love your writing style, and how you have just enough kinky goodness in this story. The yuri was just awesome.. *.* Keep it up!! Seriously, this story is tasty. And NIN is awesome! I love their music.. *.* Alot of my more interesting stories appear when im listening to NIN. ^^;; But yah, much love from me, because this story rocks my panties. ~.^

~Harlequin
person Ris
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE I HAVE TOW WHW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! A+ :-D
person Juunanagou\'s Bitch
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I like this fic. Very well written. Nice plot, too. I love plots like these. ^_^
person yuyu/dbz_girl
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the fic i think you should keep on writing i would loveto read the rest e mail me please and tell me when your going to put up the next chap.
person bul/ve_get/to
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PERFECT i love your pic ive reade it all hope ypu update ive been to your site to wonderful cannot waite till somemore freza bulma pics and 17/bra fics or goku 18 pics.
person Cooey
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I\'d better review this before I go and read the lot without saying anything! Great fic... the surprises keep coming and I\'m never quite sure what the next chapter will bring. More please!
person Vladygasckgyn
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love it. But...when are you going to UPDATE?! Hurry up! ^_~
person fanaddict
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
impatiently waiting for updates. i love the story so far. i wonder if there will be a yuri lemon, i dont like it so much but i can withstand it for a better turn out.
person Twilight-Abyss
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic so far. Keep it coming.

~Kira~
person Chasity aka Chass
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! ^^ I love this story OMG do you know how hard it was to get up to get something to eat??!! Man your an awesome writer. ^^ Keep up the super work and I hope to review you again once you have updated the other chapters. oh and a favor NO MORE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!! X.X *faints* j/k Teehehehe bye*
Your freaky fan Chasity

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