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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOOOODAMN!!!! Was that a good cliffy or what? Wooooweee! Please continue! I just started reading this story, who wouldn\'t want to be a sadist with VEGETA??? He\'s hot! Don\'t leave us hangin!
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, nice fic. I love how you captured the character of Bulma and Vegeta. Very nice! I will keep reviewing!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is great how the story is coming together. Your story is amazing. I can wait for the next chapter!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I mean...damn. I don\'t know quite what to say. Other than that this fanfic is TOTALLY Awesome! Its so dark, morbid, and twisted. And I love how you kept Vegeta in character. I hate it when he is all sappy and soft. It maybe okay in SOME cases but I definitely love how you have portrayed him. Bulma also. I have to admit that I am tending to lean toward these dark fics because of the intense sinisterness and gruesomeness. (Not to mention the kinky bondage usually included. ^_^ Can\'t be helped!) Another thing I MUST praise you on is how you are able to put so much lemon into this story without it becoming repetitive and boring. Alway a fesh new twist on their perverse sex lives. This is actually the one of the few stories that I have read that included S&M and you wrote it in a tasteful manner (Oxymorom, I know! XD). Most people are not brave eh toh to venture into the darkness but you have done one HELL of a job! I must say. I Also want to give you a pa the the back for originality. There are A LOT of A/U\'s out there were Vegeta-sei survived and Earth was purged, Bulma became Vegeta\'s pleasure slave, and so on and so forth. Most of them are alike but this one is VERY different, and in a good way. Some A/U\'s tend to get a little sloppy when keeping characters in...well...character (Vegeta mostly). They make him all gooey and lovey-dovey, only having Bulma\'s best interest in mind. Psshhht! Yeah...Right! You made it realistic. He bought her with only one intention in mind - to get his rocks off! And from there you build on their \'relationship\' (if you can call it that). It is also going at a good pace. Not to fast and not too slow. Well, now that I have probably bored you to tears (I\'m sorry!) all all of my ramblings I just want to tell you that you are a GREAT fanfic writer and to keep up the good work! (And Keep Updating X3)
- Bye-Bye!
- Bye-Bye!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing! I hope you update soon!
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Your writing is excelent and the plot is also. I can\'t wait for a update. The charaters are both convincing and consistant, witch is hard to find in most fanfiction. Thanks for a great story!!!!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
alright stop teasing us and give us what we want!!!!!!!!!!
you\'re good btw, very very good..
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you\'re good btw, very very good..
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O All i can say is.... Oh my god. Never in my life have a read a Bulma/Vegeta story this good. Ever. I heart you. Alot. You rock my panties.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
two words - frickin\'somesome.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was amazing, oh please keep writing!!!!