rate_review Reviews

Few people understand the sweet combination of pleasure and pain, you describe so well what it\'s like, how ti could poddible be craved almost needed. and Bulma\'s internal stuggl ewith herself, feeling disgusted with ehrself but wanting it, wanting him all the same,and yet at times she is justa silly girl, playing games, pouting and trying to be sexy.

This story is wonderful, it is subtle at times .

I\'m off to read more.

I wish I had discovered this fanfiction earlier. I love the lemons.

again yhea i know but this story is just getting so freakin good! i just hope bulma and vegeta end up loving each other and not killing each other! also i hope zuccinni gets her just desserts for trying to mess with bulma!

You got the slicing and dicing down. Try to explore other areas of pain and pleasure. I like the idea of handcuffs, and very muchwithwith the whips (great idea). A threesome i think not, unless it was M/F/F. Say that Bulma somehow found some long lost earth friend on Vegeta. Bulma begs Vegeta to buy her and will make it \'worth\' his his wild. Then Vegeta buys the slave from some noble in his court and use that person later on in the story as some evil plot conspiritor. One day Bulma and the new slave, Bulma\'s old friend (lets just call her ChiChi ( : ). Well Bulma and ChiChi started experimenting and guess who discover\'s them in their moment of lust, Vegeta of course (he has a habbit of popping up out of nowhere doesn\'t he).Then the Threesome fun begins. Going through the whole process will take a few chapters but will keep reader\'s interested (hey everyone like\'s two girls fighting over one cock, Catfight).

That\'s some preaty good shit i just gave ya so put it to use or i just might. And no im not who you think I am. Oh and for the love of God, get some spanking, bondage, and possibly some anal in this story. I mean Vegeta enjoy\'s giving out pain and Bulma loves pain, thoughs catagories are shoe-in\'s for the Part.
Think about my idea\'s. And May The Force Be With You! (hehe i\'ve alway\'s wanted to say that).

Also i am very sorry about your lack of reviews. If it makes you feel better I could give lots of reviews under different name\'s to the point of where i think the story should be rated. But seriously i have lots of simpathy for you.

wow i just love the way you kinda brought out vegeta\'s softer side and bulmas fighting side. i just hope you dont end up having one of them kill the other..that would be kinda disappointing. But ay gry great fic !

i read all the story already. it\'s great. i can\'t wait to see what come next. keep it.

laters

hey ya this is vegetasgirl aka catgirl you know from mediaminer? ya thats me now what the hell you doin over here? you need to get your ass back over to mediaminer and write some new shit insted of being over hereand write the same damn stuff so hop to it got it, good

p.s.
i love your story keep writing

please put a threesome in with kv/and two females

a great story i love it. and to tell the truth i love threesomes. they are so kinky but i love them please write a threesome ....