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by vegetagoddess

person Woah.
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story was one emotional one. Just how I like it. I like dramas. But the only thing that I didn't like was the evil things Vegeta had done to Bulma. Wow, he really is a monster in this one. But otherwise, great job. I liked it.
person Friend_Or_Foe
schedule September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, except for one little problem, IT'S BEEN FOUR YEARS SINCE YOU UPDATED!!!! You kept promsing to finish it, and then you decide to drop it when you only have a few chapters left? Come on! Don't leave me hanging! *sniffles and gives puppy eyes*
person Crowax
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow that last part was really something cant wait to see how will things go form here on keep up the good work.
person ZeroUnit
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well chapter looks nice so I hope to see new one any time now. ^^
person ZeoUnit
schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering will you make more of this story when you get some time in the near future?

in any cease thank you for you time and good luck with the story.
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent. Muy Caliente. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming! I like how you wrote Bulma's character. She's so much tougher, and more reliable sounding than how a lot of other people usually write her. She's not just another Bella. She's somebody who puts up a fight! And Vegeta...Vegeta's is just fifty million different kinds of sexy. I never used to see him in that light until I started reading your story. Again, great job, and I can't wait to read more. :)
person Unolai
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it. Spend an entire day reading this fic from the start, it was so captivating! =D
person jenno
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
goood goooood
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOOO I can't wait until a update!!! I forgot how much I LOVE this story!!! Until next time, bye hun! ~.^
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing
i love your style of writing
im a big Vegeta/Bulma fan!
Great first 5 chapies!

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