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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I‘m sorry that I review just after I read the first 27 chapters. But anyway, I do so now.
I have to admit that it was not always easy for me to read your very interesting piece of work. But as said, it IS very interesting indeed. First of all I'm not very much into masochism... and to be honest it is hard for me to imagine that Bulma actually gets turned on by such horrible pain. I do understand her reason, but I don't really can empathize here. I love the whole biting, blood drinking idea (I write an AU B/V vampire story myself... so I really DO like that). Anyway, these parts were sometimes hard to read, especially the one with the whip, for me.
But curiosity drives me on. This story is different and that alone makes it very special. I also do like your writing style and especially your plot ideas. I don't often am in the situation that I wonder what will happen next because I often can imagine it. But here I really don't have a clue.
Ilandra also impresses me in some way. I absolutely didn't like her from the very beginning but she is a very interesting character anyway. And the whole yuri thing.. I really was like - OMG, Bulma's cheating. But had to giggle about myself after that. She was/is a slave after all and Vegeta used her in a cruel way and since I can't empathize with all that pain-crazy-sex I understand. Maybe she can need some fluffy girl love now. My fan-loving B/V heart has to accept that ;) . Well, maybe it woun't be that way too. I guess I just have to go on and read more.
Oh, and I worry about the lovely Vegeta. I hope his mind isn't too crazy after all. Well, I do like him crazy.. but not too much of that :D . And not to forget - what an amazing idea. Prince eats fathers heart (and stuff) to gain the memories, brilliant.
Your story is very special and I could read all day and night long. (51 Chapters.. I at least am in the middle, thanks to my nightshifts and quiet patients - but that is WOW).
I have to admit that it was not always easy for me to read your very interesting piece of work. But as said, it IS very interesting indeed. First of all I'm not very much into masochism... and to be honest it is hard for me to imagine that Bulma actually gets turned on by such horrible pain. I do understand her reason, but I don't really can empathize here. I love the whole biting, blood drinking idea (I write an AU B/V vampire story myself... so I really DO like that). Anyway, these parts were sometimes hard to read, especially the one with the whip, for me.
But curiosity drives me on. This story is different and that alone makes it very special. I also do like your writing style and especially your plot ideas. I don't often am in the situation that I wonder what will happen next because I often can imagine it. But here I really don't have a clue.
Ilandra also impresses me in some way. I absolutely didn't like her from the very beginning but she is a very interesting character anyway. And the whole yuri thing.. I really was like - OMG, Bulma's cheating. But had to giggle about myself after that. She was/is a slave after all and Vegeta used her in a cruel way and since I can't empathize with all that pain-crazy-sex I understand. Maybe she can need some fluffy girl love now. My fan-loving B/V heart has to accept that ;) . Well, maybe it woun't be that way too. I guess I just have to go on and read more.
Oh, and I worry about the lovely Vegeta. I hope his mind isn't too crazy after all. Well, I do like him crazy.. but not too much of that :D . And not to forget - what an amazing idea. Prince eats fathers heart (and stuff) to gain the memories, brilliant.
Your story is very special and I could read all day and night long. (51 Chapters.. I at least am in the middle, thanks to my nightshifts and quiet patients - but that is WOW).
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, i hope you update soon
you know ix been a while and well
the story is awesome
you know ix been a while and well
the story is awesome
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT. Wow. That was HOT! Please!! PLEASE! Update soon!! PLEASE!!!!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, well, I can't stay up any longer to keep reading, because unfortunately, I have to work in the morning...and I have a few things to do before bed. It would be better if I had gotten out of work earlier, but...anyhow >< not here to talk about me. Your story is so exciting. I know how Bulma and Vegeta both feel. I have a little sado-mas tendencies myself. I did find a few mistakes in a few chapters where it looks like part of a sentence had been deleted, and the new idea continued, but they merged together forming 'false' words. Just a jumble of letters. Other than that, it has been really enjoyable so far. The concept is so..intoxicating. I'm enjoying it entirely too much I think :P. Sorry that I do not review EVERY chapter, but it would keep me from continuing on as fast as I would like, so I'll stick to reviewing after I'm done reading the chunks I can at a time. Furthermore; Chapter 10...what happened? I'm getting all excited over Vegeta wanting to be her demon and it suddenly ends. Is that an error? I hope so, if it is, please post or email me at amber_potter87@hotmail.com. Or perhaps it's just my computer? Either way, give me a heads up. Also, in pairing with your actual review (sorry, I write a lot in reviews)the description is sensatinal and definitely pulls me into the story. Vegeta is potrayed very well and Bulma is a perfect (as you said) 'yin to his yang.' Keep up the very good work, you're a terrific writer and I applaud you. *claps* Good job. *slowly sneaks over to Vegeta and kidnaps him* XD
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update!
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg. PLEASEEEEE UPDATE!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you really do not plan to continue sweetie ?
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE YOU DO NEED TO CONTINUE
from mexico, your fan: JImmy!
email me if you wish!
from mexico, your fan: JImmy!
email me if you wish!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you were repported?
i´ll report your lack of continuation, which to me represents a bigger problem
need to know what happens next!!! i bet this is just half story that we have read, but hey, you are making it harder to wait!!! its like way too good to be true, way too good to actualize? no sir, you go on writing, duty calls woman!!!
please continue
i´ll report your lack of continuation, which to me represents a bigger problem
need to know what happens next!!! i bet this is just half story that we have read, but hey, you are making it harder to wait!!! its like way too good to be true, way too good to actualize? no sir, you go on writing, duty calls woman!!!
please continue