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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me tell you that this fic is so AWESOME!!! The detail and the characters fit, but I'd have to say I can't wait till Bulma & Vegeta get back together. Keep up the good work!!! I'm rooting for ya!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey!so?where is the end of this story??i like it!!!i think its the best i ever had read!!!really!!sorry my bad english ..i am portuguese!!!lol!!bye!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for updating. I love the twist and turns this story is taking
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, love it cant wait for more action, and when their b another BV interaction. Is their anything 2 get u motivated to get you writing more often.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
First I want to thank you for the update. I really like the story - actually I´m re-reading the Slave third time already - and I´m looking forward to next update. But about the newest chapter; I was so sure that Frieza or Ilandra would end up death with whole "Bulma situation" between them, but again I was wrong. Oh, and I really miss Vegeta and I´m hoping that my favourite Prince of all saiyans will eventually find his way back to the fic and also have his woman back. But anyway, good luck with the story!
Oops, I almost forgot. Could you mail me the chapter 10? I have a feeling that some part of it is missing, because the chapter ends so quickly and it kind of ends where all the fun is just getting started...
First I want to thank you for the update. I really like the story - actually I´m re-reading the Slave third time already - and I´m looking forward to next update. But about the newest chapter; I was so sure that Frieza or Ilandra would end up death with whole "Bulma situation" between them, but again I was wrong. Oh, and I really miss Vegeta and I´m hoping that my favourite Prince of all saiyans will eventually find his way back to the fic and also have his woman back. But anyway, good luck with the story!
Oops, I almost forgot. Could you mail me the chapter 10? I have a feeling that some part of it is missing, because the chapter ends so quickly and it kind of ends where all the fun is just getting started...
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that reading the rape scene in the first chapter initially made me literally faint (I mean it, I actually lost consciousness). However, despite the psychological trauma, I returned later and read the rest of the fic and it turned out to be pretty good. I'm just impressed that you've managed to write so much. What's your secret? It seems you've kept this up for about two years. I just have to say WOW.
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just started reading your story today. Quite sadistic I must say, I've read all you've got post today and though I do find some of it a bit creepy and sadistic I still find it to be an excellent story! I hope you post again soon! And hey its like they say who am I to judge? I'm open minded so keep it up however you want!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I understand your pain. Here's a review!! So far, I'm loving this story and it's lemons! They're so delicious!! Awesome story and keep up the good work I'll be watching out for more of your stories!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i relly like ur story! plse update asap! ur story relly captivates me. i may b 14 but i write this kinda stuff. b4 readin ur story i had never written a dbz story now i hav one posted on quizilla nd ppl r messageing me all the time 2 tell me dat they like it. i thank u 4 bing my insperation nd hope u update soon.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
As you said yourself this is certainly not the run of the mill 'slave fic'. It's dark, gritty, frightful sometimes downright disturbing, and realistic.
I like it.
Admittedly, the chapter entitled 'Depraved' squicked me out a bit, but I think it was necessary. Just as I was beginning to cheer for Frieza and his daughter you threw that gem in which made me recoil. I had to re-think the fic. Most usually there are sides or characters readers will 'root' for, but not this one. Both are dark and equally disturbing and as readers we are but helpless to watch the new tortures laid out for Bulma and wait with baited breath to see if she will survive to the next chapter.
As I said to you earlier, you are among my fav authors due to your mastery of 'the dark fic'. I can't wait for the next chapter of "Slave" or "The Pain of Pleasure".
Well done.
As you said yourself this is certainly not the run of the mill 'slave fic'. It's dark, gritty, frightful sometimes downright disturbing, and realistic.
I like it.
Admittedly, the chapter entitled 'Depraved' squicked me out a bit, but I think it was necessary. Just as I was beginning to cheer for Frieza and his daughter you threw that gem in which made me recoil. I had to re-think the fic. Most usually there are sides or characters readers will 'root' for, but not this one. Both are dark and equally disturbing and as readers we are but helpless to watch the new tortures laid out for Bulma and wait with baited breath to see if she will survive to the next chapter.
As I said to you earlier, you are among my fav authors due to your mastery of 'the dark fic'. I can't wait for the next chapter of "Slave" or "The Pain of Pleasure".
Well done.