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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, not a bad story, I feel really sorry for Bulma. I can't wait till she and vegeta meet again. Um, not trying to criticize, but i think the whole Ilandra and Bulma thing was kinda........ew. Anyways, keep it up!!
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh......please update! I want Veggie to get with Bulma! Happy Late B-Day!
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is... This entire story is... incredible. You seemed to have tapped into a real part of Vegeta's personality and I must say that I respect you for that. And 44 chapters! Wow! I'm very excited with how the story is turning out, and I'm eagerly looking forward to finding out what will happen when Bulma and Vegeta meet up again.
Being a writer myself, I understand very well the agony of writer's block. I'm writing a DBZ fanfic myself (only I've always been proned to Vegeta/Original Character writings since I hold quite the dislike for Bulma), and I'm also having trouble finding the right way to put my ideas onto paper (or in this case, a big chunk of data. =P ). It's tough because you want it to turn out just right and not risk going OOC, or in my case for original character, a Mary-Sue. It's a tough road we trek, but keep you're spirits up girl! You rock! Keep fighting the good fight and keep up the awesome work.
It's refreshing to find another author who shares a similar taste in Vegeta's "older" personality, and with such an original plot too. Well. Hope you update soon, and don't feel pressure. As a fellow writer and lover of the art, I know how things have a 50/50 chance to go bad when rushed. The past three days I've spent reading this between classes and work has been fun and I'm hoping for more, so again, hang in there! ^_^
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Being a writer myself, I understand very well the agony of writer's block. I'm writing a DBZ fanfic myself (only I've always been proned to Vegeta/Original Character writings since I hold quite the dislike for Bulma), and I'm also having trouble finding the right way to put my ideas onto paper (or in this case, a big chunk of data. =P ). It's tough because you want it to turn out just right and not risk going OOC, or in my case for original character, a Mary-Sue. It's a tough road we trek, but keep you're spirits up girl! You rock! Keep fighting the good fight and keep up the awesome work.
It's refreshing to find another author who shares a similar taste in Vegeta's "older" personality, and with such an original plot too. Well. Hope you update soon, and don't feel pressure. As a fellow writer and lover of the art, I know how things have a 50/50 chance to go bad when rushed. The past three days I've spent reading this between classes and work has been fun and I'm hoping for more, so again, hang in there! ^_^
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome update please update again soon
your doing awesome so far
your doing awesome so far
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay.......that kinda really really turned me on a lot!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey could you maybe send me some more lemons on Freeza and Ilandra??
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. lots of action, and romance. I love the fact that Bardock and Brolly are present as well as the very sexy Prince Vegeta. Keep writing and don't listen when people try to flame you. Their just mad because no one likes their stories. LOL
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I beg of you to pleaseeeee pleaseeeeeee continue with this fic! It is one of the best I have read! You are a great author!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I beg of you to pleaseeeee pleaseeeeeee continue with this fic! It is one of the best I have read! You are a great author!
p.s HAPPY BIRTHDAY ON FEB 4TH!
p.s HAPPY BIRTHDAY ON FEB 4TH!