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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You and your writing rock! I was supposed to be writing up my sociology term paper and I wanted to procrastinate with a litteadieading. I came across your story and read the whole thing from start to the most recent chapter. I was completely absorbed and ended up forgetting about my term paper until I was done reading. I hope there will be more chapters. Keep up the awesome work!
~Kira~
~Kira~
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh can\'t wait for the next chapter
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What! Noooo!?!
Vegeta\'s time guarding Bulma can\'t be up, although I am really gald that Bulma has won against Hikari, dirty perv! And she did it all by herself, for a while a was worried, but I knew she would pull through.
I will be looking forward to the next chap... Poor Vegeta... Poor Bulma.
Vegeta\'s time guarding Bulma can\'t be up, although I am really gald that Bulma has won against Hikari, dirty perv! And she did it all by herself, for a while a was worried, but I knew she would pull through.
I will be looking forward to the next chap... Poor Vegeta... Poor Bulma.
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So sorry that I\'ve taken so long to review, I have only just now got a chance to read the last few chaps.
its been an interesting turn of events, and I\'m really glad that Bulma\'s father\'s surgery went well, its one thing Bulma can relax about. I\'m also glad to see that Bulma and Vegeta are on speaking terms again (well sorta).
But Hikari is still the key problem here, for both Bulma and Vegeta and I\'m worried that Radditz\' scheming seems to be working.
Looking forward to finding out Bulma\'s idea! ^_^
its been an interesting turn of events, and I\'m really glad that Bulma\'s father\'s surgery went well, its one thing Bulma can relax about. I\'m also glad to see that Bulma and Vegeta are on speaking terms again (well sorta).
But Hikari is still the key problem here, for both Bulma and Vegeta and I\'m worried that Radditz\' scheming seems to be working.
Looking forward to finding out Bulma\'s idea! ^_^
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter! and your pictures are just as good! where\'d you learn to draw like that? anyway, please continue!
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! :)
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im so glad that things seem to be looking up for Bulma.
I love how Yamcha hasn\'t left her totally, but is still her friend and is there giving her support and advice.
But I do feel torn about Vegeta...
I feel so sad when I read about how he feels about Yamcha as he is standing there with Bulma.
I want nothing more for him to give in to his desires...
but then part of me is like NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! he can\'t do that.
There lays my struggle! I love this fic...I have no idea where it is head. (and I love that) It keeps me totally interested. ove ove the advice Yamcha gave Bulma at the end of the chapter, by letting her know that she is a Briefs woman and a highly influential person in the city.
I think she really needed to hear that.
I am glad to knoat sat soesnoesn\'t feel alone and her friends are coming up to the hopsital also.
It was kinda funny...I was reading that part and I was like what about Goku, that\'s her best friend.
Then I rememebered he is the death angel.
So strangethinthink that they are angels..but that is what makes this fic so terrific..really..
You do an excellent job at writing this awesome story.
I totally love how you have portrayed everyones characters....
and it kills me that I have no idea what will happen.
Will Vegeta choose Bulma or will he remain an angel,
Will Dr. Briefs die,
What wil happen with Hikari???
And so many more qion,ion, and I know all of this will be answered sooner or later...
and that is why patience is a virtue....
thaou fou for the superb fic
can\'t wait until your next update!
^.*
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I love how Yamcha hasn\'t left her totally, but is still her friend and is there giving her support and advice.
But I do feel torn about Vegeta...
I feel so sad when I read about how he feels about Yamcha as he is standing there with Bulma.
I want nothing more for him to give in to his desires...
but then part of me is like NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! he can\'t do that.
There lays my struggle! I love this fic...I have no idea where it is head. (and I love that) It keeps me totally interested. ove ove the advice Yamcha gave Bulma at the end of the chapter, by letting her know that she is a Briefs woman and a highly influential person in the city.
I think she really needed to hear that.
I am glad to knoat sat soesnoesn\'t feel alone and her friends are coming up to the hopsital also.
It was kinda funny...I was reading that part and I was like what about Goku, that\'s her best friend.
Then I rememebered he is the death angel.
So strangethinthink that they are angels..but that is what makes this fic so terrific..really..
You do an excellent job at writing this awesome story.
I totally love how you have portrayed everyones characters....
and it kills me that I have no idea what will happen.
Will Vegeta choose Bulma or will he remain an angel,
Will Dr. Briefs die,
What wil happen with Hikari???
And so many more qion,ion, and I know all of this will be answered sooner or later...
and that is why patience is a virtue....
thaou fou for the superb fic
can\'t wait until your next update!
^.*
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Amazing chapter!!!!
Things seem to be heating up...I loved it!
A gentle cough behind her was a quick reminder that he could read her mind.--LoL poor Bulma, always having to watch what she thinks, althoug that can be slightly embarressing too.
I tried to tell her it was not safe and she beat me up.--rofl I loved that line
\"Correction, I am not leaving your side.\"--Isn\'t that sweet, I love Angel Vegeta....
Vegeta swallowed hard. \"I am forbidden.\"---*faints* Well jeez I think that might make Bulma want him even more. A forbidden angel Vegeta who wouldn\'t want that? *drools*
This was awesome and I can\'t wait for your update.
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Things seem to be heating up...I loved it!
A gentle cough behind her was a quick reminder that he could read her mind.--LoL poor Bulma, always having to watch what she thinks, althoug that can be slightly embarressing too.
I tried to tell her it was not safe and she beat me up.--rofl I loved that line
\"Correction, I am not leaving your side.\"--Isn\'t that sweet, I love Angel Vegeta....
Vegeta swallowed hard. \"I am forbidden.\"---*faints* Well jeez I think that might make Bulma want him even more. A forbidden angel Vegeta who wouldn\'t want that? *drools*
This was awesome and I can\'t wait for your update.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Thank you!
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter!!!!
I can not believe that reporter...well actually I can, they will do anything to get a good story! But that nurse I can\'t believe her! How could she do that!? I really hope Vegeta gets through to Bulma in time enough before she does anything with Hikari, I really hate that guy. I love this ficcie! Can\'t wait until your next update!
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I can not believe that reporter...well actually I can, they will do anything to get a good story! But that nurse I can\'t believe her! How could she do that!? I really hope Vegeta gets through to Bulma in time enough before she does anything with Hikari, I really hate that guy. I love this ficcie! Can\'t wait until your next update!
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