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for And We Were Angels

by AMCM

person Laini
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well guess what...I LOVE IT...this story is very good AND interesting.just thinking vegeta as an angel makes me shiver,damn bulma -.-.ooook well anyways i love the story and cant WAIT to read more.Update A.S.A.P PLZ! Until then Good Luck!
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an emotional chapter...and Mr. Hikari..ugh!!! i hate that guy! How could he do that. I feel so badly for Bulma, I really hope she doesn\'t go to that beach house...that would be just sad...
Gosh, she is very determined to save capsule corp...I would be too, but I see it means a lot to her, especially since she said she would sell her soul to Satan himself...wow...intense. Veghas defidefinately got his work cut out for him and he is even shedding tears...I will be patiently awaiting the next chapter.
Keep up the excellence....
^.*
-MB-
person Hecate18
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven\'t reviewed in a while, This is the only free time I\'ve had all week. ^_^
I hope Dr. Briefs will get better, for Bulma\'s sake, it\'s good now that he knows about her breakup with Yamcha and they have talked about it.
And what Yamcha did to Vegeta was cruel!
And that Johanna Marley, I really do hate her, if it wasn\'t for her Bulma wouldn\'t have this problem with Mr. Hikari.
I hope Bulma doesn\'t sell herself to him, like Vegeta said its not worth it it it will ruin her.

Looking forward to the next update! ^_^
person Shiro Ryu
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Thank you! Hope yodatedate soon!
person Kay\'s Craft
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, that\'s bloody news to me! When did Radditz do that? Did I miss something lol?
I can only rmemeber him dropping a feather lol, damn he must be one fast shager.
Anyways this chapter was cool. Go Bulma! Though she should of smacked the old slag.
And poor Veg, we all know whats gonna happen now ^^, hahahaha!
Looking forward to your next chapter hun.
Kay
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
I loved it as usual. Raddjustjust won\'t give up will he? I just love him in this fic, but part of me hates him. That he is trying to corrupt Vegeta. But that\'s what makes this ficcie soooo good. All the temptations, struggles, and everything else. I can\'t wait until the next chapter.

Oh and I did stop by your website, you are a wonderful artist! I loved all the pictures...the one where Goku and I think it was Carla are doing math and he says can I have a hamburger...rofl that was so adorable.

Don\'t forget to keep up the excellence...

^.*
-MB-
person Kay\'s Craft
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GET IN THERE VEGETA MY SON!
Not something I\'d usually say, but hell the guys an angel, they all good XD.
Looking forward to your next chapters hun :)
Kay
person Kay\'s Craft
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Slaps Bardock on the back* Well my my boy! That\'s the way to get things rolling and keep yourself entertained!
And LOL, at Bulma smacking the crap out of Veg, she really needs to sort that out lol, from the looks of it Veg is a very delicate Angel :P
Keep up the good work hun :)
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Kay
person Hecate18
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww that was really sweet! ^_^
At least he knows now what Raditz did, so now he\'s gonna watch out for her.
This fics brilliant, each chapter leaves me wanting more...

Looking forward to the next chap!!! ^-^
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter...
I wonder what vegeta is going to do to Radditz?? Does Vegeta thing Radditz did something more other than leave that feather? Did he do something more? I love how having Vegeta around her always seems to lighten Bulma\'s mood...since she has been having various struggles to overcome.
I can\'t wait for your next update.
^.*
-MB-

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