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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter! I can\'t wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter! Man Vegate is pissed ain\'t he! HEHE. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!! :)
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! That was a wonderful chapter! Vegeta is getting so protective ^__^!
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that chap, the end where Bulma hit Vegeta was cialcially funny. ^_^
Ooooh and now Bulma\'s dad knows, I wonder how he\'s gonna feel about \'the new guy\'.
I thought Vegeta was ly sly sweet in this chap (until his comment towards the end! ^_~) but he\'s excused \'cause he\'s an angel. ^_^
Looking forward he nhe next chap!
Ooooh and now Bulma\'s dad knows, I wonder how he\'s gonna feel about \'the new guy\'.
I thought Vegeta was ly sly sweet in this chap (until his comment towards the end! ^_~) but he\'s excused \'cause he\'s an angel. ^_^
Looking forward he nhe next chap!
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!! :)
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw...I wouldn\'t consider Veggie-chan an angel, but I assume this is very AU. Nice job, though it\'s only the first chapter
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goku as the angel of death, hm? Nice touch. I wouldn\'t mind seeing that face when I die. -smiles-
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^.^ Another great chapter!!!!
I hope nothing bad happens to Dr. Briefs...I mean since Yamcha snuck in and told him everything. *shakes fist at Yamcha*
This is soooooo goooood I just love Bulma and Vegeta\'s relationship. When she hit him that was so cute when he was like try not to kill me and when Dr. Briefs said it would take a saint of an Angel...very good line.
This fic truly does get better and better.
I love Vegeta\'s character...his struggles...him feeling like he belonged when he was walking alongside the humans, and the fear that put in him. Wow...this is just awesome.
I only can wait and wonder to see what will become of all of them...
Keep up the excellence
^.*
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I hope nothing bad happens to Dr. Briefs...I mean since Yamcha snuck in and told him everything. *shakes fist at Yamcha*
This is soooooo goooood I just love Bulma and Vegeta\'s relationship. When she hit him that was so cute when he was like try not to kill me and when Dr. Briefs said it would take a saint of an Angel...very good line.
This fic truly does get better and better.
I love Vegeta\'s character...his struggles...him feeling like he belonged when he was walking alongside the humans, and the fear that put in him. Wow...this is just awesome.
I only can wait and wonder to see what will become of all of them...
Keep up the excellence
^.*
-MB-
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely great!!!
I really did feel for Bulma when her dad was questioning her about Yamcha. That was a lucky escape she had!
I think it was about time Bulma had a break, she really needed it! I was really suprised when Vegeta \'rescued\' her, taking her to the movies... I wonder how thats gonna turn out. ^-^
I liked Bardocks \'excuse\' of Vegeta bothering him, Naughty Bardock. ^_^
Looking forward to the next chap... I love this fic!!!
I really did feel for Bulma when her dad was questioning her about Yamcha. That was a lucky escape she had!
I think it was about time Bulma had a break, she really needed it! I was really suprised when Vegeta \'rescued\' her, taking her to the movies... I wonder how thats gonna turn out. ^-^
I liked Bardocks \'excuse\' of Vegeta bothering him, Naughty Bardock. ^_^
Looking forward to the next chap... I love this fic!!!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am completely entranced in your story. I cannot tell you how much I love your story. The simple fact is that it is wonderful.
The plot and creativness is astounding and it is so cute to picture Vegeta (drool) as an angel. Wish I had wings :(. Anyway, I look forward to your update with great anticipation! Keep up the great writing!
elvenangel
The plot and creativness is astounding and it is so cute to picture Vegeta (drool) as an angel. Wish I had wings :(. Anyway, I look forward to your update with great anticipation! Keep up the great writing!
elvenangel
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chatper! I loved it. I really like the senae between Bardock and Goku. It was fun to read.