rate_review Reviews

Yes! Yes! Yes! (reader says jumping up and down in excitement!) ^__^
I am so glad that you are such a speedy updater! Your last chapter was as good as usual! I imagine that if you post your stories here, you also read other peoples stories here. I have been reading another author who does DBZ fanfics, that I think you might like. The author is Blue Siren, and the story is \"Meant To Be\". I hope you don\'t mindsortsort of plugging the author on one of your reviews, but I think they are good, and I noticed they have not been getting alot of reviews recently. I also imagine it means alot more to an author when another author reviews your work. I know it would to me if I ever got the courage (not to mention didn\'t spend all my time reading ^__^) to write. I think its really something when someone actually grabs their balls (figuratively of course ^__^) with both hands and courageously faces the empty computer screen (or paper) and creates! Anyway, thank you again for all your hard work, and I look forward to your next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, this is GOOD! I love it!

Oh man, poor Vegeta! lol!

Another update! Alright!
I loved it! but I guess you knew that right? Seeing as how I love all of your chapters.
Vegeta made me melt when he appeared when Yamcha asked where her date was, that was so sweet of him. I could quote many of the lines from this chap that made me *die*,*laugh*, or *melt*, but it might take up the whole page b/c this whole chapter was just wonderful.
The character\'s personalities are so well defined it\'s a joy to read. Who knew I could love a story so much?
I have like 5 fics that I die for and they are must reads for me, and this is one of them.

I love it, it\'s unique, and its just written very well.
thanks for updating!
^.*
-MB-

Aww poor Vegeta can\'t get a break...not that he wants one. Great story update soon.

*laughs hysterically* Poor Vegeta! hehehe. I absolutely LOVE your story! This is definately one of the more original and one of the best that I have read. I am definately happy and I hope you update as often as possible, onegai! Keep up the AWESOME work!

My deepesologologies for reviewing so late, I recieved your email a few days ago and reading this fic was on my list of things to do. (It was a very long list. ^-^)

On chapter 7, I felt truely sorry for Bulma, Just at the time she need Yamcha the most. But I can\'t really feel any hostility towards Yamcha because he had his reasons for doing what he did.

Oh and Raditz, he is so naughty. ^-^
I find myself charmed by his character.

This fic is truely beautiful, and I am eargerly awaiting the next chaapter. ^_^

WOW!!! Alot of stuff was happening in this chappie!!!
First of all I love that when Vegeta is troubled he follows Bardock around, that is so cute.
The whole story of what happened to Bardock that was an awesome tale, but very sad.
I loved when Vegeta said the fruit and Bardock says She wants to but fruit? You had me rofl!!!!
But now I do wonder what happened to the woman Bardock fell in love with since they both defied God togetether...has me thinking...

It also makes an interesting dilemma for Vegeta, to see if he will take the advice given him, not only for his sake, but for Bulma\'s.
Radditz just doesn\'t give up does he? Now trying to get Goku...
Gosh, you have no idea how much I love this story, and it makes me happy when you update!
as always keep up the excellence...
^.*
-MB-

Keep thoes chapters rolling in hun, this story kicks ass!
Also poor Bardock :(, my heart goes out to you dude.
Kay

Hmm...I just tried to send review but got an error/busy message. Well it won\'t hurt if you get two reviews from me. The gist of my last review was that I loved your last chapter and am looking forward to reading more!

Love it! Absolutely loved the last cha! S!