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by Makota2112

schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your note at the begining reminds me of the scene in Little Miss Sunshine where the police tell the family they won't press charges as long as they promise to never compete in the pageant again. LoL

Very weird, but neat. I've never read a story like this one before ^.^
person War-chan
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O!!!!!!!!!!!! Damn.....I can never look at Shin the same again........damnit and I own the DVDs! Now everytime I see him I\'ll think nothing other than about him getting rammed by Gohan and Frezza...........................*gets stupid smile on her face*......cool! The DVDs where getting boring anyway!!! ^__^

Ja ne
ShinIsSuchABlanceSlut
Miss War-chan ^_~
person Kaioshin
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, it\'s soooo weird. I hope you keep up the good work and write another one soon. P.S. did u no this story appears on a kid\'s website about Shin with no warning tag attached.
person Trisa3d
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"fucking weird wasn\'t it?\" Literally. That was unbelievably delicious! I hate that there are so few fics of Kaioshin-sama. Granted he\'s melodramatic, bipolar, and overly effeminate, but he\'s so damned cute! Great fic, looking forward to more!
person Red Dragon Kirby
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, this rocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the way you had that balance stuff on there and that Supreme Kai had to sex both Freiza and Gohan to have balance. OMG that was SO KEWL!!!
person Ginia
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"fucking weird\" I\'d say that was a fairly good description my sweet Makota. It\'s so nice to find familiar names when I go fic hunting. Now I had better get off AFF and get busy with my updates...
person SaphireMMTPX
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so cool..then...frezza..and ew.but still cool! o.O Shin\'s a horny bastard, he remeinds me ofazokazoku from Slayers..Feeding off the emotions, or spirit of another to live
person SatanSpinner67
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was AWESOME!!!! I love the way you wrote that story. It just made the S Kia seem SOOOOO powerful. And, I must say, I do love the ending. Nothing makes me smile more then a bit of a dark twist. hehehehe ^__^*
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*faints* I loved that! I love weird things! But seriously I loved it! The twist at then...was very, very, good. I agree with Lotus you should do a sequel. Besides Vegeta, Supreme Kai is one of my fave characters, there is just not enough fics with him. This was very well written, and so descriptive. The whole balance thing was an awesome idea! Shin is so naughty...I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person lotus
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was strange. But GREAT!! I really liked the twist at the end. Are you going to do a sequel? Pleeeease?

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