rate_review Reviews

I remember reading this story a very long time ago and there are missing chapters and huge gaps in this story. It could
be I read it from another uploader. I don't know which story is the original but the one I read earlier was very well
written. I really liked it. Another thing I find unusual is why post comments from your fellow uploader as part of the story. Some parts were funny but for the most part it was annoying.

I loved your entire story, but one thing (not even as part of the story) had me giggling like a loon in the very PUBLIC library while my computer is down (the timing couldn't have been worse!).

"...straight slash..." chapter 12 in the AN. That is just so wrong...*giggling again*

Its awesome I swear you should give yourself a pat on teh back ^^

Wow, this is amasing! xx Much love goes to te fic. xxx Poor Goten can give birth, poor guy may have to suffer the "joys" of labour. But well done! I am looking forward to reading more! xxx

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Chapter 14 is only a paragraph long. The rest of the story is missing. x_x

wow! that was wondeful!! i read the whole story, AND the sequel \'Even More of Us\', and i guess, the sequel to that, \"frosting chronicles\'. it took me about 3 days(since i have a life...) but i had a lot of free time, and i stayed up til\' around three in the mornng each of those days!

*blushes* that just shows you how great your writing and stories are!! Now im totally interesting in reading \'Hormone Therapy\' and the many sequels that follow!

wow! once again i loved you stories!! im going to go and review each one that i read now...just so you know!!!

this was a great story!

Excellent! It\'s one am and I love this!

now wouldnt it be interesting if the basic events of this story happened on Vegetasai? with goku\'s and vegeta\'s parents arond? along with a lot of other experieced females around to give advice?

so... when is the next chapter? huh huh? better be soon! *glares*