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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I went to your site and was checking out all your stories and stuff. well this story and the sequels to it aren\'t on there and i was just wondering if you were planning on putting them on your site because when i usually get into reading something i like AFF decides it\'s not going to work for my anymore and i\'d really like to read the rest of your DBZ stories. i already read the meaning of pride series and that was really good and i want to be able to read the rest of them. anyway, really great stories and please drop me a line when or if you decided to write another DBZ slash.
ja ne^^
ja ne^^
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When did Goku become part female? Was it in another fic of yours? I should probably go read that first... Nice story so far. Nice ance too =P
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, is that a cliffhanger! Shit!
So one can presume that Vegeta has gone evil now, right? Or maybe not... Either way, I'm sure you have one hell of a twist up your sleeve.
It's also a cool detail that Goten ended up like his father Goku-- as well as the fact that Bulla, while the most quiet, was/is the first one to
master her ki. Well done!
But I have one question.... How the heck do you manage to turn out so much good material for so many different stories with so many different chapters all the time? It's amazing!
So one can presume that Vegeta has gone evil now, right? Or maybe not... Either way, I'm sure you have one hell of a twist up your sleeve.
It's also a cool detail that Goten ended up like his father Goku-- as well as the fact that Bulla, while the most quiet, was/is the first one to
master her ki. Well done!
But I have one question.... How the heck do you manage to turn out so much good material for so many different stories with so many different chapters all the time? It's amazing!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I really love this fic so please please update soon.
BYEBYE LadyKATT
BYEBYE LadyKATT
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man.... I\'m a major Chichi fan and -I- liked this fic! Damn!
And besides a lot of explicit, erotic unmentionables about what I think of the very raunchy sex scenes, I\'m just thrilled with the story, and can\'t wait
to see what Vegeta\'s gunna do. I have to admit that at the beggining of the story I thought Goku would be bringing Turles, Raddiz, Nappa and Brolli back
to life.... but this is just as good (though I still miss those guys bad *sniff sniff*).... Great work!
^_^
ps. --- are goku and vegeta -ever- going to learn proper safe sex technique?
And besides a lot of explicit, erotic unmentionables about what I think of the very raunchy sex scenes, I\'m just thrilled with the story, and can\'t wait
to see what Vegeta\'s gunna do. I have to admit that at the beggining of the story I thought Goku would be bringing Turles, Raddiz, Nappa and Brolli back
to life.... but this is just as good (though I still miss those guys bad *sniff sniff*).... Great work!
^_^
ps. --- are goku and vegeta -ever- going to learn proper safe sex technique?
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read Chapters 1-7 in one sitting, and even though I have never liked male pregnancie fics, I could not stop reading this one (I only did to review and to get my ass to do some chores) I love this! It is creative, funny and very addicting to read, I must say that I cannot wait to finish reading this one so I can start on the sequel...Keep up with the exellent creative work^^
Blue Siren
Blue Siren
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe it\'s over, but theres a sequel so I\'m not sad. That was great!on\'on\'t think I have ever know anyone to finish a fic this fast!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no!!!! Vegeta can\'t be evil! what happend? I love veggie-chan! more you need to write more!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was it? Whaaaaaaaaa! Oh, well, it was a great fic. But all good things must come to a end. ON TO THE NEXT ONE! *runs off all enthusiactic and shit*
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bonus! Two chapters :-) A wonderful chapter of baby first\'s, parents proud declarations and hot Saiyan sex.
Laughed at Goku trying to tell Yamcha about Bulla\'s ki blast, and Yamcha sort of listening, whilst trying to back off - carefully. LOL Gods. I can still picture it...I don\'t think I\'m ever going to see the characters the same way ever again :-)
Vegeta was so wonderful with Bulma at the hospital, I liked that...His brief kiss to her forehead and then \"You did good\" and feeling a softening in his emotions towards her. Sigh...so sweet.
Goku and ChiChi was a sad but sort of tender scene with just a touch of the acerbic that we associate with Chi...I\'m glad she was able to move on.
Laughed at the quiet, whispering scene in the kitchen as they all ate as soundlessly as possible - a near impossibility for Goku, but he managed it - those kids must be driving them all insane by now. LOL
Could actually visualise Vegeta insanely shouting FREE FREE as he whirled through the air, the only problem is, in my head, he morphed back into early Vegeta, who had laughed insanely at the others when he was wished back from Namek. LOL
Pleased to see that the Hyperbolic Time Chamber was put to thoroughly good use ;-)
I loved all of the next chapter as well, but the thatthat really got to me, was Vegeta\'s fears about losing Goku and his thoughts about how he wasn\'t going to let that happen, followed by one of the best love scenes I\'ve ever read...Very, very touching.
Oh, and the teaser at the end! What a cliffhanger! Does this mean that we lose Goku along the way?...Nooooo! They were so happy together. Wait a minute, Trunks\' future changed...oh, what\'s happening? I need to know...okay, I\'ll be quiet and wait patiently.
\"Vegeta: Hn. Finally I rule the world.\" LOL. Yeah, you go Vegeta!
Don\'t feel bad about missing an update - you update at a wonderful rate, and, of course we\'re not going to murder you, ya big silly, after all, if we did that, who would write the story? ;-)
Laughed at Goku trying to tell Yamcha about Bulla\'s ki blast, and Yamcha sort of listening, whilst trying to back off - carefully. LOL Gods. I can still picture it...I don\'t think I\'m ever going to see the characters the same way ever again :-)
Vegeta was so wonderful with Bulma at the hospital, I liked that...His brief kiss to her forehead and then \"You did good\" and feeling a softening in his emotions towards her. Sigh...so sweet.
Goku and ChiChi was a sad but sort of tender scene with just a touch of the acerbic that we associate with Chi...I\'m glad she was able to move on.
Laughed at the quiet, whispering scene in the kitchen as they all ate as soundlessly as possible - a near impossibility for Goku, but he managed it - those kids must be driving them all insane by now. LOL
Could actually visualise Vegeta insanely shouting FREE FREE as he whirled through the air, the only problem is, in my head, he morphed back into early Vegeta, who had laughed insanely at the others when he was wished back from Namek. LOL
Pleased to see that the Hyperbolic Time Chamber was put to thoroughly good use ;-)
I loved all of the next chapter as well, but the thatthat really got to me, was Vegeta\'s fears about losing Goku and his thoughts about how he wasn\'t going to let that happen, followed by one of the best love scenes I\'ve ever read...Very, very touching.
Oh, and the teaser at the end! What a cliffhanger! Does this mean that we lose Goku along the way?...Nooooo! They were so happy together. Wait a minute, Trunks\' future changed...oh, what\'s happening? I need to know...okay, I\'ll be quiet and wait patiently.
\"Vegeta: Hn. Finally I rule the world.\" LOL. Yeah, you go Vegeta!
Don\'t feel bad about missing an update - you update at a wonderful rate, and, of course we\'re not going to murder you, ya big silly, after all, if we did that, who would write the story? ;-)