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Intresting turn of events....why pray tell will Vegeta turn evil?Awww well this gives me some very intresting...thoughts...../snickers*hurry up with the sequel!

lmao! poor yamcha!! i still wanna see how you manage to wriggle trunks and goten into this story. :)

I\'m actually reviewing on time, ITS A MIRACLE!!!

I thought that chap was so cute, just adorable. I loved the way Vegeta took care of Goku, and the way he was with the new borns... awwwww!

\'Painfully, because his butt really did hurt a lot\' - I feel sorry for Goku, but that really made me laugh... mean aren\'t I! And those bits at the end, after the chap with Goku and \'Geta make me laugh sooo much!

I always finish reading the chaps with a smile on my face... Or rolling on the floor laughing!
As always I\'m looking forward to the next chap. In fact I\'ll be checking every five minutes... then I\'ll go to sleep, wake up, go to college... but as soon as I come back I\'ll check again... (Or I\'ll probably take a sneak peak at college. ^_^)

I\'m babling again aren\'t I, I think I ate too much sugar U_U;

Oh wow! Vegeta chose Takashi. I can\'t believe how eed Ied I got when I saw that. Thank-you Card, I feel deeply honoured :-)

I loved Bulma\'s sarcasm in the opening dialogue with Vegeta. So Bulma :-)

Vegeta\'s territorial instincts really warm me. I love him like this. He is so tender with Goku, so caring. I loved the bath scene.

If \"GET OUT\" is Vegeta\'s idea of being polite, then I really wouldn\'t want to piss off the man. LOL

I love Gohan in this! His sighing and then: “I’m going to go back to Piccolw.” w.” Cracked me up :-)

This story is shaping up so nicely, I never want it or \'Hormone Therapy\' to end...Well, I naturally want them to have an ending, but I\'m dreading the day when that happens. These two stories really brighten up my day :-)

BTW: I always love the little dialogue at the end of the chapter, but this one was especially amusing. The two Saiyans comparing butt pains. ROTFL!

-_- I just left a review...and it didn\'t post it...WHY??????
Well anyway heres the gist of what I said:

NO!!!!! It\'s over????? WHY?????? How could you end it like that????? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN WITH VEGETA!!!!!????? TELL ME!!!!!! You know I can\'t handle this...the waiting, the wondering... *pulls hair* HURRY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok other than that evil cliff hanger...awesome work! I love Vegeta in this story, and I know I have said that multiple times, but I do...His protectiveness over his mate, and the way you describe his feelings...so nice.

“Well,” Vegeta said as he caught a flying sippy cup that had been aimed exactly at his head, that was so funny, and very cute!

Vegeta highly doubted they had ‘volunteered’ for the job, rofl, I agree w/ Vegeta on that one!

and when Bulla blsted Trunks and he says great beaten by a girl...that was hilarious!

but keep up the great work!!!!
^.*
-MB-

*grins*and enter trunks and goten!Ya really got to love those two.And you haven\'t written any????*gasp*I couldn\'t even tell.Your very good.Continue.

Thank-you for going back over that paragraph for me, I apprec it it and your explanation. The paragraph now reads so much better for me, sorry for my paranoia.

Ah, I love how Bulma loves little Trunksie already :-)

Oh, I so love panicky Vegeta...he is so caring and loving.

Poor Goku, he\'s now realising that he\'s growing breasts...bonus for Vegeta, but not much fun for the world\'s strongest. Still, the next time he\'s in a fight if he starts to lose, he can always flash them...sorry, warped sense of humour, sometimes.

Ah Goku ya big meanie, let Vegeta look after you.

\"Joy. Vegeta thought dryly.\" ROTFL! Absolutely loved this!

I loved the whole birthing scene, so wonderful...from Goku\'s panic to Vegeta\'s pride. Then when Goku told Vegeta to purr and he trilled. I could picture the scene so well. Evocative!

More :-)

Wonderful chapter...I love Vegeta in this. It\'s so cute how he is so protective for Goku and while bulma is doing all of the stuff...he thinks that is Kakarott\'s right b/c he is the mother. *sighs* I just love daddy Vegeta. I thought for sure someone was going to get mad at Gohan when Bardock was only hanging by his tail from Gohan...phew...I\'m glad no one did.

Poor Goku\'s bottom. I would love to really see Vegeta carry Goku, I don\'t think he ever has. I remember when he had the heart virus he kicked him to Piccolo...*shakes head* that was soooo mean! Although you think the chapter was short it didn\'t lack a thing it was still terrific!!!

YAY!!!! Your reading my ficcie!!!! and yeah it\'s called Malicious, that\'s my fave onat Iat I am writing. ^.^ I hope you enjoy it!
JayGoose-why yes I did read your review and I left you review on your Kalika story. *shakes fist at you* Darn you for making me wonder who is going to be pregnant and who is going to have a baby x_X Yoow mow my brain can\'t handle these things...I will be thinking about it forever!

So your going to skip ahead to the births of Goten and Trunks? Yay!!! I wonder how all these babies and parents will interact w/ each other...
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-MB-

Awww! That was soo cute. I guess that Gohan couldn\'t take so many screamers at one time. Can\'t say that I blame him. *Sigh* And yes of course MB did read my review and promptly went on to threaten my life. :) Makes me feel special. Too bad it\'ll be one or two chapters before anything is revealed. He He. I am so evil. Oh and thanks for reviewing my fic. I need all the help I can get. ;)

That was good.Keep writingove ove trunks/goten (Mirai or Chibi it doesn\'t matter)^^ anyway continue.