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by CardDragonBall

person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RAD!!! Chappie!!!! Awe those little saiyajin babies, I bet there just too cute, especially the one that looks like Vegeta!!!! You should name one Vegeta!!!! It\'s only fair, I know they are all royalty, but the one that looks like Vegeta is more royal than the rest.....just kidding!!!!! ^.^
Vegeta...delivering babies, and Goku pushing thut, ut, now that\'s a sight to behold!!!
I just love this ficcie!!!!
^.*
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person Hecate18
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven\'t reviewed in a while!

Awwwwwwww!!!! That was so cute, you could just picture in my head.^-^
There gonna have a handfull Goku and Vegeta cause now there\'s two more babies on thier way!

Sorry I\'m not much help with baby names, I have difficulty remembering my own name, (well my middle name, I sometimes forget and it\'s hard to pronounce.) ^_^

Anyways, this is kinda my review for the last two chaps, I\'m so glad Vegeta saw through his pride, it was about time! ^^
Looking forward to the next chap...
person jaygoose
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The babies are here. I understand completely how hard it is to find baby names. I\'m gonna have some kids show up in my fic eventually. (But don\'t tell Mechanical Butterfly its supposed to be a surprise. Well, maybe I shouldn\'t have posted it here. Hmm. Maybe she doesn\'t read your reviews. Well...she doesn\'t know who\'s gonna be the parents...still some surprise left I suppose...Probaby should not be talking to myself here...He He.) Anyway, I started looking for names early. Luckily, I already have mine, but it will be a while before they show up. Oh and by the way, I loved this chapter. :)
person CrazyGurl
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww the babies are born!!!! I also think one should be named Vegeta CARRY ON THE ROYAL NAME!!!! I love that one is named Bardock, that\'s very sweet.
person Naruto_Kenshin
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry haven\'t reviewed in awhile -_- been ill, but am now better! And wow the brats are born!!!! One is named Bardock, thats great, I would have never thought that. Vegeta following Goku all around, ahh that was so sweet his protective nature. I love the relationship they have.
person DextersMommy
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving this story. I\'m fairly new to the Goku/Vegeta fanfiction but this is one of the best stories I\'ve read. Part of that comes from the fact that I\'m a sucker for a well written MPREG story. Keep up the good work!
person kitkat
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Sorry i don\'t review more often. I wrote a review right after chapter nine but i grew old as i couldn\'t post it right away. Now i still didn\'t read chapter 13 but i had to leave this review here anyway.

Chapter 11 and 12 were the BEST chapters ever, i mean it. The way you made goku turn into another level of SSJ because of emotional pain, the way you made he and Chichi talk and \"make Goten\" (Chichi was so sweet), the way you made Vegeta go to Bulma even not really knowing what he was doing... and the way you made Vegeta swallow his pride and give up to Goku. Just GREAT! The right dosis of angst. Very well done.
person kitkat
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Sorry i don\'t review more often. I wrote a review right after chapter nine but it grew old as i couldn\'t post it right away. Now i still didn\'t read chapter 13 but i had to leave this review here anyway.

Chapter 11 and 12 were the BEST chapters ever, i mean it. The way you made goku turn into another level of SSJ because of emotional pain, the way you made he and Chichi talk and \"make Goten\" (Chichi was so sweet), the way yade ade Vegeta go to Bulma even not really knowing what he was doing... and the way you made Vegeta swallow his pride and give up to Goku. Just GREAT! The right dosis of angst. Very well done.
person pixy
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The Babies don\'t die.....DO THEY?????
With so many babies around.....boy, they\'re gonna be sooooo busy!
person Ladylupin
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Most mpreg stories involve the \'mommy\' being cut open. Its ok, but this is so much better! My logic is that if they\'re pregnant, they can dang well push the thing out like a women! Wonderful chapter! Can\'t help you with the names though, because I DO think one should be named Vegeta!

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